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| Man-Fish 2006-10-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was great. I especially liked the idea of them meeting up and having wine every week. |
| VampireNaomi 2006-10-02 ch 1, | abuseGreat story! It fleshens the gap between the first and second game very nicely. I also liked some of the light touches you put here and there, like the debates between Nico and André and George listening to the radio. The phone conversation was really in character for George. Good work. |
| PurpleYin 2006-09-28 ch 1, | abuseAww, his luck isn't great is it. Nice story though, love to see more in this category. Thanks for writing it. :) |