Oh man. That's just downright evil.
Teaser? Argh
Anyways: I'm most curious of what's about to happen and my favorite parts are those two reflecting about each other. Ah yes young Obi-Wan and grumpy Master Qui-Gon are just too adorable. Really liked the scene in the deeper levels where Qui-Gon comforts Obi. So subtle and beautiful.

Good story! Keep it up!

Love it! I honestly don't even have a favorite part because its all awesome. Please update! :)

Great story. I loved the interactions between Qui Gon and Obi Wan especially in the first chapters. Isn't always the way, the people you want to impress always see you at your worst. The other is interesting. Did he come from the meditation exercise? There were some spelling and grammar mistakes but they didn't affect the story.

I can't wait for the next chapter. Thank you for your wonderful story.

hey, i really really really hope you'll still be updating this story... :D

Guh.. please update soon. I read all 8 chapters within 2 and a half hours to say the least I've been on the edgeof my seat!

Interesting story so far! I am curious to find out how Obi-Wan and his ghost are interconnected besides the planet they share in common and what had Qui-Gon running! Please update again soon!

Please, please update!

awesome! this is such a great story. thi is my second time reading it, hoping that you updated... you didn't so can you plaese update soon this is a really great story.

P.S. is obi wan suppose to be nor? Because the evil other half of him seems to sinister to be that baby with those caring type of parents. The other seems more like the uncle but the uncleis too old to be obi wan and it doesnt make sense with "i am what will be"

Can't wait to read more!:)

Went over just fine. Force a padawan at Qui and he runs like a gazelle from a Cheetah...but present him with someone he sees as needing the least bit of coddling...and he turns to absolute MUSH.

Google Master and Apprentice Archives if you like really GOOD pre-Phantom Menace fanfic though. It's my favorite archive for the fandom. HUGE.

Alright! Keep going. I am excited to see how this turns out. So far, this is a really great story. Keep going!

favorites of this chapter, huh? well, that would have to be...the part where Qui-Gon was thinking of Obi-Wan, before his talk with Tahl..it was good..the whole chapter was, but that part stood out the most...please continue! i am quite curious to what is going on with Obi-Wan! i'm guessing he was that baby that was left in the desert...just a guess, of course...will he meet his parents? i'm guessing the man he keeps seeing is his uncle...you must update so i can find the answers to those questions! please...
you don't know how many times i stumbled across this story, but never clicked on it..it happened so often that i did FINALLY clicked on it...i am really glad i did..this is turning out to be freakin' brilliant! great job! keep it up! i really can't wait for the next chapter! i love Obi-Wan and Qui-Gon bonding stories! especially ones where Obi-Wan is young!

I just read through Unexpected Awakening in one sitting and immediately afterwards I found Sleepless, which I also read in one sitting. This story is amazingly interesting and I didn't feel like doing anything else until I found out what would happen to the characters. Thank you so much for sharing

p.s. that teaser! Gah

pleeeeease, write more sooooooon! I'm dyyyyyiiiing of impaaaaatiance! plehehease...