Hi CSMars!

My vote would be for the second choice. with Ranma and Akane's POV's.

I liked your work, it's dark and angsty. I love the part when Akane said "don't you remember you made a woman out of me..."-lol that was a quotable quote.

Akanne-Anne

update this story... and at least all your unfinished Ranma fics; love thy enemy sounds pretty cool and i think it could make up for a great story... or did you stop writing altogether?

Damn... Where to start? okies.

1) Wow, great imagination. What about Ranma's curse? You barely used any Rumiko Takahashi's characters... I mean... Who'da saw that comin...?

2) I just can't see Akane being all dark and mysterious and what-not?

3) Confusing... but still oh so cool in a cruel twisted... soap-opera... movie... thing... YEAH! Like "Cruel Intentions"! I still think it's cofusting though.... OH WELL!!!

You're a great writer, though... Keep up the.. yeah... Ja ne!

I realy hope you continue this! This story shos a lot of potential and I hope you continue. Please continue soon.

ummmmmmm.......interesting.....

the fic is coming out good, but i think it needs to be explained a little more. like what happened before all these things happened, and how and why, etc.

I like both options but the second one is good. The first chapter intrigued me and I really can't wait to find out how the situation came about.

Woah, very dark. When's the next chapter coming, this has got me interested.

cool!! ^_^ i'll be waiting for the next chapter... make it longer please! ^_^
if u need prereaders, mail me, i've got an offer 4 u! ^_^

Wow... very powerful... but about the rape... can you explain the reason more? Cuz i don't get it. If he loves her, why would he want to hurt her? THis is a great storyline and i can't wait for more. And I hope you go deeper into the reasons why the murder of Soun Tendo happened. And Why ranma hurt Akane so. Keep the great work up!
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A very interesting start here. I would do it in both of thier POV and since Genma is friends with Soun I would think it would work out better if the death was an accident but the loyal servants either didn't see all of it or what they did see they took wrong. That is just an idea that stuck into my head since I have no clue what you have planned so far. It's ok that they are OOC as you said it's a alt fic and some things will not always be the same. I'm also glad it's a Ranma and Akane fic those are the best have fun writing.

Interesting start... Although I'm a bit confused, but I'm sure it will be explained later... I think this story is a "new" type of story, well at least not many have written like this, so I'll be happy when the next chapter comes out

ooooh do continue soon, it's sound very interesting ^_^

Since there are a lot of reviews that pretty much say the same thing, I've just decided to reply here. First of all, I'll change the summary and indicate that this is a R/A fic and it's alternate universe (in which, the characters are usually OOC). And about Ranma and Ukyo's engagement, they're still engaged (by their parents) in this chapter, and I will explain everything in the next chapter. About Akane being OOC, you must remember that she is a princess and needs to maintain her position. Of course, if someone raped you, you'd be screaming bloody murder the next time you see him, but she can't do that and still be looked as a proper princess in others' eyes. About writing this as a original, if you'll just wait 'till the next chapter, the characters will have a lot more in common with the ones Takahashi created (you can't judge the characters in this chapter, I mean, come on, a girl just got raped and is pregnant and the guy just found out he's going to be a father, wouldn't that throw anyone off their scale). Ukyo? She will be in the next chapter when I write this story from the beginning (I knew I should've done that in the first place) but I'm saying this again: this fanfics will NOT be a Ranma/Ukyo fic, I'm Ranma/Akane fanfics writer, sorry.

Whoa...that was sudden. Can't wait to find out how everything came about and what happened to Ukyou.