lol, this story is funny in that whatever Shinn wrote in is Diary was the total oppositee of what really happened. Which is a lot more funnier

Extremely well written, the crossover with chobits was done nicely. Your puns are very good too! The way the diary entries contradicted what actually happened in reality was clever and funny. It was laced with humour throughout the story as well, which I enjoy very much.

I agree with the Blue Cosmos/Green Peace idea! Green Peace is just full of shit (memories from 2-3 years ago...)

I will put this on alert just incase you decide to upload another chapter or so of this fic. Great work!

whoa, okay. um, i don't really know what CO means, but if it means "copy of", then i understand. to tell the truth, i was hoping to see a flair of your original writing style in this one-shot (or supposedly one-shot), but it just feels so clamp-like. yes, i know IT IS a clamp story, but it's TOO clamp. it just feels so plagerized (sorry for that comment, but i can't help it). i mean, i don't mind you copying the idea, but how shinn meets stellar, how he came from a farm, how he saw a persocom for the first time in a shop, how he acts like a pervert, how luna is so much like sumomo, how athrun is going to fall in love with the teacher later on, it just...lacks originality. i don't know if that's what you were going for or not, so i really can't say more on how much this story really...affected me.

i know many people would love this story seeing as they may have watched the anime or read the manga, but being someone who doesn't have a particular fondness for anything clamp (except Angelic Layer), this was quite disappointing. i'm sorry if this review wasn't one that you deserve. you are a good author. really great! i tend to read "Fallen Angel" from time to time (i would read the whole thing, but i'm just so busy to do so) and i just loved the scene with luna running away from athrun in the latest chapter that it has plagued me to this day (in a good way, of course). it was so subtle, but so perfect. it was amazing, but this...

i don't really want to say it was disappointing, but for me, it was. if you want to continue the story, then go on right ahead. don't be down on my review okay? (and if you aren't, then all the better.) it's a really nice shinnstellar fic, especially for the ones who love the pairing, and that's all that should matter, right?

anyway, keep writing. there's always room for improvement (btw, try to check your work once more. i've always noticed it's been covered with simple mistakes, so watch out for that!) good luck and take care.

Nice do one for Legal Drug!

Aw! I love this story! Please write more!

you shouldn't make it into a one-shot...wish it was a multi-chapter...keep it up.