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ready anf
2007-01-25 . chapter 3
I just came across your story and I already fell in love with it.

It's so simple and deep at the same time.

How you write... it just captures things so easily and I wish I had your skill.

Keep it up :)
westpoints
2006-12-30 . chapter 3
Short? Who cares about short? I really hate to use a cliche line, but...it's not the quantity that matters. (I'm not going to finish it, because I hate cliches.)

Seriously, this is a good story. It's thought-provoking without trying too hard, and it's written completely with pronouns.

Have I told you how much I love stories that mention the characters' names as little as possible? Probably not, since I've just discovered you. But I do.

Now I'm just rambling too much. I'm looking forward to the next update!
aprimavista.
2006-12-08 . chapter 3
One word: beautiful.

I'm just noticing now that you've updated & it's alright if it's short, it's still amazing. & I definitely don't think I have a better definition of love, yours (or Sharpay's) was perfect.

Thanks for the compliment about my stories, by the way. It means a lot.

I can't wait until you update, whenever that may be =)
thnxforthefish42
2006-11-28 . chapter 3
very sweet, very sad. please continue :)

I like that we get to see a side of Sharpay that's not expressed in the movie :)
-drinkingfiction.
2006-11-28 . chapter 3
I'm literally in love with this story. I should have left you a proper review last time. lol

This story is so well written. I truley can't wait to read further chapters.

Glad you'll remember me! That means, one of these days, when I'm famous, I'll remember you!! ♥

Update soon, m'dear. It's an awesome story line.

Sharpayxoxo
Ghostwriter626
2006-11-28 . chapter 3
hmm interesting very interesting
listentothethunder
2006-11-28 . chapter 3
I loved that chapter. I have no idea
My favourite lines in that chapter;
Love is like when you're little and you blow those fluffy dandelion things all over in the wind, making wishes.
But they don't come true.
And;
Just like you keep making dandelion wishes even though you know they'll never come true.

Update soon!
aprimavista.
2006-10-08 . chapter 2
Wow, I really like this. I agree that Sharpay is complex and I like that with fan fiction writers can really explore her personality whereas Disney just writes her off as the villain of the story. Anyway, I like your style & even though it's short it's got a quality that many long fics don't posess. Keep up the good work & update soon please =]
Ghostwriter626
2006-10-05 . chapter 2
idk y im confused lol nice chapter
Gandalf3213
2006-10-05 . chapter 2
Good one Finny. Only who's the guy? And who's the girl? Anyway, I like it. Keep it up, I want to read more.
listentothethunder
2006-10-05 . chapter 2
Sounds awesome so far. Update soon!
A Dawn Delivery
2006-10-04 . chapter 2
Aw. You dedicated this chapter to me? Thanks, Finn, you're a sweetheart. :)

0 reviews?! Personally, I love your style of writing! It leaves so much more to the imagination, and, and, I don't know... everything just flows smoothly. Nothing sticks out like a sore thumb.

It's a pretty way of writing [as you may have noticed, adjectives aren't exactly my forte] and I wish I could write in such a 'mysterious' way. Alas, I'm a run of the mill, details-and-description kind of girl.

The length, I think, is fine. It makes me pound my keyboard in frustration, wondering where the 'rest' of the chapter is, but it's fine. Short works. Short makes everything that much more subtle. But short may be what drives readers away. -sigh- :/

People like length and fluff and cliffhangers and drama and substance and something to mull over as they eagerly waste away, waiting for that next update. Which, I think, is utter B.S., because quality is on a much higher threshold than quantity, but some just don't see it that way.

But don't you worry. I won't suddenly *disappear* on you. I'll loyally read and review until the day this fic ends [which will be a very sad day, indeed].

I'm proud that you haven't given up in trying to take the literature community by storm, though. Bah, fictionpress. Fanfiction's where it's AT!

Okay, I guess I'll end it here, as it's getting to be a tad long. Update soon [!]. 'Hello Beautiful' is exactly what I need to help stimulate my mind during 'Intro to Literature' [my brain literally-hah, no pun intended-dies in that class].
-drinkingfiction.
2006-10-04 . chapter 2
Whoa! Your an awesome writer! I love how you started the story. Your very good at writing and I think you should do it professionaly. I would buy EVERY single one of your books! lol But I seriously would! I read the summary and I thought, "This sounds so intregeging(sp?) and so I read the prolougue and I was like, "OMGOSH!! THIS IS SO AWESOME!" same with the 2nd chapter. So flipping awesome!! Update soon!

Tootles!
A Dawn Delivery
2006-09-28 . chapter 1
The summary only hooked me in; the prolouge dragged me in deeper. Definitely continue this, it sounds... interesting. I agree, Sharpay is a very flexible and beautiful [I'm not sure if those are the right words] character. I love her. Despite my burning, passionate hate for "original characters", I think this could turn out to be a favorite of mine. :)
Mr. Fishy
2006-09-27 . chapter 1
Yes please continue this. It's captured my interest.
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