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BLUEMENTRIT 2008-02-27 ch 1,	abusekya nice
The Puppeteer 2008-01-26 ch 1,	abuseExcellently and impressively written one-shot. Intense sexuality with a level of realism for the characters and their history. They were in character, despite it being highly sexualized, and I was thoroughly entertained. I love very descriptive stories and you were able to do that for me. It was detailed and relavent, rather than being just filler. Well done and I'd love to read more Sess/Rin love from you.
they-call-me-sam 2007-10-30 ch 1,	abuseto confess, i was only reading this for the lemons. haha. but you write such beautiful descriptions that i stopped to actually read through the entire story. Sess was sort of in character. I loved the way they were kind of confusedly having sex. Its sort of funny, but its great lemon. hahah.
Kerridwen LeStrange 2007-10-29 ch 1,	abuseVery, VERY well written, I loved it. ♥ I've read this before and adored it then too. You are one of my idols on this site, just to let you know. (gives you cyber hug) XD hope I'm not too creepy, haha. -Kerridwen LeStrange-(used to be Gwen the Kakashi Obsessed)
KoolKittyKat256 2007-09-26 ch 1,	abuseoh my god! that was awesome!
catinthehat007 2007-09-23 ch 1,	abusehot steamy and very sesshomaru haha good oneshot overall yay for you
EL 2007-06-29 ch 1, anon.	abusewow that was good. loll oh um that "pelt" as you called that Sesshoumaru put on AhUh is Sesshoumaru's tail...loll but its cool. it was a good story.
SilverGhostKitsune 2007-06-26 ch 1,	abuseGreat fic! I loved it!
Gwen the Kakashi Obsessed 2007-06-13 ch 1,	abuseI had never read a Sesshoumaru/Rin fanfic before and you have made me a fan already! Lol. I really liked it. You did an excellent job with the lemon. You put so much detail into your stories, it really is amazing. I mean, I'm not trying to sound like a pervert but all your fanfics are enjoyable to read. Good job, please continue to write because I will be reviewing. -Love your stories always, Gwen-
Lord Divestre Croft 2007-06-12 ch 1,	abuseBrilliant...but...didn't he kinda rape her?
Anonymous 2007-05-30 ch 1, anon.	abuseholy...! That was...umm...interesting. I've been looking for some good lemons about these two characters, but erm...I mean I read (and seen) a LOT of stuff, and yours is definitely like MA-35. Points for explicit material described so artfully. Whoa, besically. Very overpowering smut - well, as overpowering as smut can get, lol. Constructive criticism (cuz i'm a grammar freak): -spell check your story, please. Countless incomplete sentences, where comas should be used to fuse them. I thought it was the writing style of yours, but it just didn't work for me. - one "weariness" was used instead of (I assume) "wariness" . THis kind of stuff takes the reader out of the suspended reality. -just spell check, please (^_^) Good work on plot construction, luv it.
HawkAngel XD 2007-05-20 ch 1,	abusewa... cool fic! au revoir! HawkAngel
Somebody 2007-05-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat was ...umh I do not have words for your writing. I rarely read lemon flicks because I believe most are over rated and lack true romance and intamicy, but this was not the case with your's. It had the right balance, so it was very compelling. Keep writing stories like that and you'll get lots of reviews. :)
Valkyrie Skuld 2007-04-15 ch 1,	abuseI really enjoy this fanfic. I find myself reading it over and over just because it is one of the very few well written InuYasha fics that actually has Sesshoumaru IN character. Bravo!! =)!!
Shadeslayer390 2007-04-15 ch 1,	abuseomg this is the cutest thing EVER. i love how you incorporated the fact that because Rin was raised by two MALE DEMONS, she doesn't know much about sex. and i loved Sesshy's oh-so-tiny bit of compassion towards her--a little, but not too much^^ very nice!! wonderful work^^

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