I loved the old tv show and you did a great job with it.

Wow. That was lovely. Nice way to link the 1966 with the brooding. It's depressing, and heartbreaking, and very well done.

O, what a great idea! I like it, and the fact that it ties the colorful and light to the dark and well...dark. Good work, and I love the first person pov.

Whoo-hoo! I finally found a story for the 1960's batman! I have to say that my first crush was Burt Ward, but I did enjoy watching him get into nasty spots, like when the Riddler kidnapped him in the first episode, and the drugged Batman was almost sobbing in the Batmobile.

I like the very clipped way its written, but how did he die? Some elaboration would be greatly appreciated. Other stories for the wonderful Caped Crusaders of old would be nice.

Have a great Bat-day!
Kitsune Hanyou

An interesting twist on the Adam West Version of Batman.

ooh i like it :)
im a huge 60s fan that was really go
well done

VERY good, I am impressed. You've shown the shininess and then taken it away from Gotham. Great job!

great story had lots of emotion and it was also smartly writtin.

i give it a 7.5/10

Oh man.

Please tell me that you work on a longer version of this. It has a lot of potential, and I would love to see a more detailled story.

good, very good. you had Bruce pull the Dark Knight out of that pit in his soul where he was hiding. That's just good.
Continue your writing, you have great insight.

Great to see you're still writing! This piece was a very interesting idea. Quite a stretch from the television series to the present Batman, but you made it fairly plausible. Your writing has wonderful flow and emotion. It's always a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing. :)