This was the greatest Fresh Prince of Bel Air fanfic I ever read. Okay, this was the only one, but still, this was fucking hilarious. I couldn't stop laughing for 5 minutes straight! You, sir, are a genius.

Uhh this was the fucking worst story ever can't you spell god! This is awful so awful that my dog won't understand this!

This was the most gripping fiction I have ever read.

...This may be the greatest thing I've ever seen in my life.

Oh my God. Do you see this, people? This is what the internet was made for. This is by far one of the best fanfics I have ever read about anything, ever. This surpasses all expectations. If the show was still on, I would bet the writers would ask your permission to use your script! This was fantastic. Bravo, good man.

This was so hilarious

I added it to my favourite stories. You were joking right? I am this has got to be some sort of satire? Wait, don't tell me. It's funnier if I don't know.

I thought it was hilarious, the ahahahhaha and the (will looks in camera) parts were a riot. You bet your coin!

lol thts good story

this is how the lyrics go

Now this is a story all about how my life got flipped turned upside down and I'd like to take a minute just sit right there and I'll tell you how I became the prince of a town call Bellaire.

In west Philadelphia born and raised on the playground is where I spent most of my days chilling out, maxing, relaxing all cool and just shooting some b-ball out side of the school when a couple of guys they were up to no good started making trouble in my neighborhood I got in one little fight and my mom got scared and said you moving with your aunty and uncle in Bellaire.

I whistled for a cab and when it came near the license plate said fresh and it had a dice in the mirror if anything I can say that this cab was rare, but i thougth naw forget it, yo home to Bellaire.

I pulled up to the house about 7 or 8 andyelled to the drive yo ho smell ya later I looked at my kingdom I was finally there to sit on my throne as the Prince of Bellaire.

this story was very busy

there was no plot, no problem or resolution

the spelling was very bad

there were no paragraphs and not much of it made sense and the whole thing was more like a script than a story.

other than that I like how you included the theme song at the beggining

This is a piece of writing about one of my favourite TV Shows which I watch almost every other day. Positive comments about this story are:

-The song which was included in the beginning, proving the enthusiasm that this reader has

Ways that this author (Dug Seachang) can improve this story:

-There are many grammar and spelling mistakes throughout this whole story which can easily be edited out

-The sound effects such as, “da da da da da” are not needed to be repeated over and over again so many times. This could bore the reader very much

-Words should not be repeated such as “hi” from 8 different characters in a row.

-There were also some racial remarks which shouldn’t have been made because a reader could very well be offended

-Having capitals at the names of the characters before a line is said

FESH PINCEFresh Prince

HAVEINGHaving

CartonCarlton

uncle pillUncle Phill

giraffeGeoffrey

hilleryHilary

Were you serious? Or were you just playing because that story

was horrible. I'm not even trying to be to spell!

Wow. That wasn't good at all. I could barely read it.

By the way, it's

FRESH PRINCE,

HAVING.

and I'm guessing Dung, is DOUG?

Please, please use spell check next time.

This was so incredibly stupid. I couldn't finish reading it..

It was only funny because it was so stupid...I guess thats what you wanted.

Rofl! I'll admit, that was terrible...so terrible it rocked! Awsome job!

Okay this story sucks. Learn how to spell, you idiot!