 Mika the Rainbow Vampire 2007-11-21 . chapter 5Wow, poor woman's tormented. Dartz screwed her over in one and then another huh? I love the changes, they really added to the story. I was so happy to finally see an update. A lovely addition to the growing tale and we got t o see Mana's uh...contribution. Love it, have a fantabulous day! |
 dragonlady222 2007-11-21 . chapter 5Good chapter. I see you brought in the three girls. I like the names for them. Will the rest of the cast appear? |
 Fifilafemme 2007-11-19 . chapter 5OMG an update! I seriously happy to see that you're continuing this story, and I really liked this chapter. Now that Medea has been kidnapped by a slave trader, I have a pretty good feeling where she's going to end up. Oh and it was nice how Tea, Mai, and Serenity(right?) got a cameo in the chapter. I cannot wait for the next chapter! :) |
 silverfoxninja 2007-11-17 . chapter 4Whoa, interesting chapter!! I love the way you made Dartz react to that idiot witch! LOL!! I would slap her too!! ^_^ |
 silverfoxninja 2007-11-17 . chapter 3That's such a sad chapter. I love the way it was written though and it's a captivating part of the story. ^_^ Great job, like always!! |
 silverfoxninja 2007-11-17 . chapter 2Ooh, interesting. I never saw that coming. But you know, reading this chapter, I was thinking that Amelda is much the same way since he's really clever at picking locks and espionage. I see where he gets it. ^_^ |
 silverfoxninja 2007-11-17 . chapter 1I know who the god that she is named after!! *beams* But I'm not going to say it here because then others will see it and cheat. I will give you a clue to how I know. There is a temple erected for these nasty little things that like to swarm in the summer during picnics. Just make sure you have a swatter handy or a zapper! ^_^ |
 RandSpyd 2006-12-06 . chapter 4Oh meh, this story is awesome! I'm really looking forward to reading more!
I loved how you characterized past life Amelda and Raphael- I was so sad when Phael died! And at first I really hated Bezzelba... but by the end of chapter 4, I was actually feeling a lot of sympathy toward her character. I also really like your writing style, it's very intelligent and I love your descriptions, I can really see this! Anyway, awesome story! |
 Sisco 2006-11-14 . chapter 4Oh! This is getting juicy! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!! X3 |
 Fifilafemme 2006-11-10 . chapter 2That Bezzelba is a complete you know what for sending poor Medea off on a wild goose chase. I was glad to see that Miru overhead what was going on. What's going to happen to Phael? Anyways fantastic job on this chapter. |
 Fifilafemme 2006-11-10 . chapter 1Can you believe that I just discovered this fanfic? Anyways all I can say is that I love it! It's really original and I don't think I've ever seen anything like it. Great job! |
 SpiralingFlames 2006-11-10 . chapter 1Sorry, I haven't been on the computer for a while! Your idea is quite unique. I can't wait to read the next one! By the way, what is Kundalini? |
 LeDiva 2006-10-31 . chapter 4 Hahah! That nasty Bezzelba deserves to get her butt kicked! This is going to be a tough task for Medea but it makes the story even more interesting! |
 LeDiva 2006-10-31 . chapter 3 Hey I just noticed that this story got updated! Poor Medea having to come home and finding that after everything her hubby is dead. That was so sad but I can't wait to see what happens next! I'm off to read the next chapter! |
 MOG 2006-10-27 . chapter 4 *Squishes you with glomp* Me likes. Me sleepy. Me wishes to give more praise. But me no able to think of anything good right now. XD |