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narutonarutolove
2009-11-01 . chapter 11
well write whenever u have the chance,and if ur tired of writing,then just do a chapter more or something,i really like this story,bc its very very original,i really loved this story,and when i read that Sasuke put a gun to his head,my heart started beting really fast,it wouldnt be good that Sasuke dies,it would much better that when Sasuke pulls the trigger the gun jams,it has to do with fait,and then later on when hes in the mall he finds Neji or whatever,itll be very cool if it was like that,i try writing storys about sasuhino,but when i read it i get tired and then erase it,lolp,O,by the way,i pick B,its better if the story ends that way,^.^
411
2009-06-29 . chapter 1
Just thought I'd give you a warning; there is a writer here who has been plagiarizing stories. They used to go by Pillar of Winter but now use This Account Does Not Exist as a screenname. Look up "A Very Special Arthur" and compare it to this thiefs "A very special Stan" and "A very special Data". They are word for word identical.
Be on guard for this person and please, pass on this message.
Anime-baka
2008-12-10 . chapter 11
NO! YOU CAN'T DO THE NOCTURNEd!

Even if someone likes this story so much and takes your advice and tries to create one with a similar storyline, it won't be as good as the original!

But, well, people have lives to attend to. I understand.

Come back when you can.
evaljilly
2008-11-06 . chapter 10
interesting story. Im a huge RE fan and it was put together pretty well. 2 choices, huh? i want choice B because i don't necessarily like bad endings.
Kelly
2008-10-18 . chapter 11
Well you don't have to be anal about it!

*cries*
Kelly
2008-10-18 . chapter 11
Well you don't have to be anal about it!

*cries*
Emerald-Mistress
2008-10-12 . chapter 11
I'm really sorry how insensitive people are being, take a nice long break! You deserve it ^.~
uchihasasuke9
2008-10-09 . chapter 1
this story i like that game dead rising
American Daydreamer
2008-10-09 . chapter 1
Ha! I knew it reminded me of Dawn of the Dead! You mentioned a mall scene at the end, and that was an immediate give away. XD. Anyway, very interesting romance/horror fic. It's refreshing to see zombies involved instead of vampires this time.
Masantine
2008-10-08 . chapter 11
I'm really sorry, man.

Hopefully I'm not one of those people who have been giving you a hard time.

If you're busy, then I totally understand. I know what it's like when life is kind of piling things up on your plate and you're not at all hungry.

Update when you find the time, and it's okay to take a break if you need to.
Schemes
2008-10-08 . chapter 11
Eh, I know how you feel about being a stock person, it's a **. As is Life, so it's understandable if you're stressed out or ** at the many reviewers asking/forcing/threatening you to update. I am not a writer myself, but I understand how it is to be pushed into something you don't feel like doing.

I'm not asking for a story update, I'm just here to say (er..write...>__>) to get better, or cheer up. Sometimes it's best to just lean back, stare at the monitor and if you get angry walk out of the room and throw something. I too have experienced the weight of people expecting you to put something up. See, I have a dA account...in which I am a moderately decent artist. *shrug* And it came to the point where people wanted more from me. In the end I deleted all my drawings and left dA for a month. I disappointed many watchers...but, I needed the space.

You need that too, so if you read this, I appreicaite the fact you spent time reading. Take your time, and by the sound of your job, it be best to quit and find a better one. Cause, you deserve a better work place. Throw in a complaint while you're at it, it's what I would do. =P

Anywho, hope you well!

Schemes
xXx.LadyMikoto.xXx
2008-10-08 . chapter 11
Hey, I was just passing by and saw this story and read it, then I got to the last chapter and I completely understand where you are coming from and I feel for your situation. I also haven't been able to update in a long time because of work and just life itself so I understand why you are so frustrated (saw the reviews as well) Most of them are really wow and uncalled for. I am sorry that you have to get bombarded with those all the time really I am.

I hope things get better for you, I know what it feels like when things are just alksdhalktue but everything will work out for you. They always do.

Well I have to go, I don't want this to drag on and seem like I am not sincere and just saying things (I think too much.) well Update whenever you can and if you cannot I completely understand.

-hugs- ^__^ Ja'ne.
Panda-sama
2008-10-07 . chapter 1
Dear Sweet Mother Mary of Jesus F**king God...It's been almost 9 months since I sent a sizzling/passionate/tough-love/crazy-awesome review AND YOU STILL HAVEN'T UPDATED! (You might have also noticed *ahem* -insert a gloating Gai face here- I learned how to use slash/stroke marks! [Did you have trouble saying that last part? I certainly hope so!])Now, I might have been *a little* mean in that last review, but seriously: if you would just check your other reviews you would find that they all pretty much unanimously vote B. (Wow, you're like George Washington! Except for *hopefully* younger and *hopefully* less hair on your back and *hopefully* without WOODEN TEETH!) So, I would just like to say that you should update. NOW. (If you don't, well, I'll HUNT YOU DOWN FROM WHERE EVER THE F**K IT IS THAT YOU LIVE IN THE U.S. OF F**KING A., PULL THAT FAT HEAD OF YOURS OUT OF YOUR BUTT {along with that 50ft pole}, AND HELP YOU TYPE THAT LONG-OVERDUE NEXT CHAPTER OF YOURS BY BEATING YOUR HEAD INTO THE KEYBOARD!) {
ItachisCat
2008-08-25 . chapter 10
Continue the story! It's too good to end like that, and there are too many loose ends!! Write more, please! No matter how long it takes!
blackraven615
2008-06-22 . chapter 10
Continue the story!
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