sango=coral how very interesting nicely done i really liked this

Wow that was such a beautiful fic. The side story of the doll added a dimension to it. Plus, the philosophical lesson is something to ponder. Great job on the fic! It was very well- written and I just LOVE your idea of comparing Sango to the doll. I thought it was very creative of you. By the way, I'm a fan of Iggy's work too. keep writing! :)

beautiful, i love it.

I loved it. So many nice things, it was a wonderful theme to convey. The scene between Miroku and Sango with the pebbles was inspired.

Oh, the pretty.

I haven't read fanfiction in months, but when I saw that you had written one, I had to come read. Now I remember why I love Mir/San. They have one of the more interesting dynamics and this story is creative and interesting and believable enough to showcase what is so special about them.

Your characterizations are beautiful and your writing is clear, often to a devastating effect as the reader takes nearly every word to heart.

Lovely as always. Thank you for posting it.

oh, how I love you.

Oh me, oh my.

That was wonderful, really. I thought it was sweet, a much better read than all the other MS fics that are being put up.

I really don't know what to say.

I liked it,

Especially the ending. I didn't see that coming!

^^

That was really enjoyable, and your writing style is beautiful. The characterization was spot on, and I liked how you connected the two stories to help show the theme.

This was wonderful. I loved the premise for the story, the issues it addresses, and the structure of it (with the two narratives running parallel to each other. It was a very interesting plot device, and very cleverly used). It was a beautiful story. Great job, and thank you for writing and sharing :-)

AAUGH IT'S SO INCREDIBLE I DON'T KNOW HOW YOU DO IT!!

Really. It's a wonderful story, and I'm especially fond of it because SCARS ARE BEAUTIFUL. I love them. Her scar remds me of Shoebox_Project on Livejournal... Have you read it? If you haven't, you definitely should (as long as you lik/don't hate Harry Potter, or at least the older generation). It's very long by now, but so very worth it.

Sirius: [upon seeing a picture of Remus's new scars] I wish I had bloody great scars like that! Tell you what when we get back to school you can take a stick and jab me one right in the face with it, then we'll be matching. Like how some girls give friendship bracelets, we can give Friendship Scars.

You write Sango well.

I was going to be lazy and just enter my name as Iggy in the anonymous space without going to the trouble of signing in, but since you felt so guilty that our "meeting" was cancelled, I guess I shouldn't do that :P

That said, arigatou gozaimasu AKA thank you very much. I'm actually trying to drop the habit of speaking random Fangirl Japanese, but in this case, since you probably knew what it meant anyway I felt inclined to use it to show my... appreciation? o.o

Anyways. This story is really good. :brain goes blank: Uh... very descriptive? Sorry, but this is written by you, May-chan, and I can never find anything to criticize this. Your writing is good, and I like how the "inner beauty" meaning was reflected throughout. Miroku respects and enjoys Sango for who she is - even if she thinks she is ugly and resents her own appearance, the monk does not care. He likes her inner beauty as well as her outer beauty, and to him, she IS beautiful.

Did you actually write this for me or just dedicate this for me? I just find it hard to believe anyone would write something for me, and especially considering you said you had a PILE of homework to finish up at 3am... well, you know what I'm aiming at.

But very good piece. The non-usage of contractions and stuff like that strongly remind me of Scribe-sama's writing, but the "poetic style" in the flashbacks and characteristics of the two main characters never cease to amaze me that you wrote this.

In other words, good work.

And thanks again. :) You rock May-chan, yes you do.
You know it.