So Sweet.
*G~H*

great story

Aw! That was adorable!

you stole the last part of the Flashback from The Father

Cool story. love the student participation...even if it is to gang up on a blubber mouth.

Good work!

it is really good

THIS IS REALLY GOOD. I THINK THAT MAYBE YOU SHOULD CONTINUE THIS. IT HAS POTENTIAL TO BE A GOOD LONG STORY.

I like the story because I love the Harmony ship (or pumpkin pie if you prefer) and I love nothing better than a good Ron bashing. The only thing I like more than Ron bashing is Draco bashing and of course the Harmony ship. The only problem was the Rose character and that was only because she came out of nowhere. But you did make her character interesting, she is alot less of a racist scumbag than her brother thats for sure, how did you think her character up? I wish the romance scene was a little bitt longer but thats okay because the Ron bashing made up for it (grin). Not bad, good job.

i liked it but i think you could go much further with it! ne way gud wrk

i really think you should continue this story this has the potential to become a really great multi-chaptered fanfic.