WHY DID U STOP I LIKED IT WRITE SOME MORE!

wo your fanfic is graaeet! i was thinking abaut knkuxten but then i think abaut neji and i remember temari and i say to my self "m is an intersting couple" so i investigate and i read your fanfic and i tel you pleease continuee it!


eem... if you dont understand me right is because im mexican ¬¬

Lol! It would be funny to read in Konoha Times, Hyuuga Neji is no longer qualified for the Hottest Bachelor of the Year 'cause he's taken...lol

I haven't read many TemaNeji (honestly, there aren't that many of them...), and I'm really a ShikaTem fan... but TemaNeji interested me, so I wanted to read a few. ^-^ I really like your idea, setting up the whole story and everything! I like the whole 'Newspaper' thing in there to close everything together and speed it up (maybe). I really hope you continue it! And truely... I'm a little dislexic (ugh, I don't even know how to spell it) so I might have read over the mistakes, but I think you did a pretty good job of keeping them out of the story. ^-^ Hope to see you soon, good luck writing!
~Lil Enchantress~

The idea is very interesting but I think you could have done a better job with the dialodge and characterizing the characters. Temari seems a bit OOC if you ask me. I've always thought of her as aloof, sarcastic, and witty, not another Ino or Sakura.

And the dialodge seems kind of choppy and rushed.

But this pairing is cool and I think you have definate room for improvment.
I'll hope to read the next chapter soon.
--Griggling