I hope you continue this. Even though it's only one chapter, I really got into it and enjoyed it immensly. ^_^

wow this is great! i love the way you capture oishi's personality! please update soon!

Ack! You need to update. I can't wait until the next chapter. I like how smart OIshi is. UPDATE!

This was so amazingly excellent. Great writing, very strong. Not to mention the plot, which is believable and much more human than a lot of the stuff on here. I really would love to see more of this. I hope to see an update soon. Thanks and keep it up!

-kelly

This is a very good piece of fanart, with each one perfectly in-character. Although I'd prefer the Manga version over the Anime Version regarding their first years (Oishi seems more outgoing in Manga), the flow of your story is very logical and convincing.

Do you have a plan to finish the story? If so, I'd be very glad to ask the courtesy to translate it into Chinese and share it with my friends.

INSTANT FAVORITE!

This deserves all the reconition in the world, not just the number of reviews you have...this was so incredibly well written that I feel so incredibly jealous...gwah!

great job there!!it was fun reading!!

Awesome. You write really well. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Interesting. I look forward to reading the next part! I especially liked the meeting between Tezuka and Oishi. ^.^