I liked the story, it was depressing but it kept my attention

*cries* omg how could u this story was so amazing omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg im seriously crying like alot right now this story was so amazing how could zuko die?!?! DX

Nice plot twist.

Grim is suppose to be grin. That's just a type-o.

Aang happy about Zutara? I don't think so?

So sad! Don't make Zuko die in any more of your fics! Please!
\But, I liked it.

o sad ending...

just a tip about making your stories short. sometimes having a more chaptered (giggle) story can be better for the readers. this is because when you have less chapters, you have to make things go quickly and the readers get confused. Also, I do understand about to many chapters. There was this on story I saw that had like 52 chapters!! It was crazy! Anyways, this was pretty good...

oh poor katara, i really thought her and zuko were going to kiss. sigh...i suppose not then.

oh zuko you paraniod thing you!! lol, yes i noticed the spelling errors (and i cringed...) but you say you dont speak much english?? this actually pretty good considering. lol, Aang and his jokes...

OMG...so sad..Sob..i got misty eyed reading it.. ur such a great wrighter. Bravo. te he..

This is really good. I like the side of Zuko and Katara that it shows. Though I can't say that I think that this is how it should be. I am more for the Avatar and Katara pairing but you did a great job. Keep it up

It is a cute story. The plot is moving a bit too fast, however. If I read it correctly, You had Zuko and Katara falling in love in just a few days.

Still, I read your profile and this is a good start for you first story in English. As for the English grammar: You might like to check your verbtense agreement, your subject-verb agreement, and your punctuation. Contractions, like 'isnt', should have an apostrophe('). Example: isnt should be isn't. The apostrophe(') goes where the letter's have been dropped. You should also use the apostrophe(') to denote ownership. Example: Zukos pillow should be Zuko's pillow. Adding as 's' to the end of the word with out the apostrophe(') make a word plural. Therefor, 'Zukos pillow' doesn not make grammatical sense in English. Those two words imply that there are more than 1 Zuko.

You might also consider getting an English-speaking beta-reader to go over any grammar problems before you post a new chapter.