This is amazing! although i do wish you would have added more to it.

Magical, no doubt about that!

I can't think of a better way to describe the feeling of discovering Tolkien's Middle Earth.

Nice interaction between the characters, especially Harry and Alice.

The end was a nice touch, after all, what more could you wish for?

Cheers.

simply cute

aw, I loved it! that was really good! I love that side of Harry! hee hee hee... great oneshot!

interesting

This has to be the most poignant and heartfelt chapter of any story I have ever read, the atmosphere and description of the bar is breathtaking.

And I wish I could go there...does this exist?..maybe its better if I leave it be a mystery..

I do wish though that you write more on this, Harry getting inspiration from the Lord of the Rings (I think those were the 3 books:}?)

Keep writing

Awsome start.

How cute
Alice sounds great
and Sirius *sigh
such a good godfather~

good job!

I've liked this so far. Can't wait for things to happen in the next chapter. Oh and do keep up the WONDERFUL work :P

Goofers

Hey great story so far, i really enjoyed it. I really hope you keep it up and i cant wait for the nexct chapter. lol kinda getting tired of the ol Harry/Ginny fics, and most Harry/Oc's are lax in detail and discription.
Your doing a great job keep it up.

- Maikeru

Ah can't believe this is only a one shot - it is excellent. Very imaginative and what a bonus to have both Sirius and Harry in same story

Very nice indeed.

Well... this was... different, but nice nevertheless. Though I find it shocking, that Harry can smell Sirius' jacket from the window ;-)

And are you sure that Alice was "/doping/ her best to explain the action behind each carving"? :P

Greetings,
I.