i like this story but god some of it was so sad and depressing (well not depressing just more sad)
** it almost made me cry but then thats not saying much LOL
be a man and cry:L
cant w8 till the next chap

peace:P

WOW! Loving the story. Oh I hope Kousa pays for what he's done. Lina should beat him up good for hurting poor Xellia. Plz update soon!
I CAN'T WAIT!
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WOW, I wouldn't have thought that Xellia would be in such a state. Great story^^ Filia blushing... is so cute
see you around
sayo

YOU'RE ENDING IT! THIS IS STORY ROCKS!! I LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON! BTW is Xellia gonna be okay?

Oh, I just love this story! Oh and I think I've got a hint as to who Lon is...TWO WEEKS to update! I'm goin nuts. Can't wait for the next chapter. Later! ^-^

Hmm, Xellos sure have some analytical abilities^^
Oh and it starts with some X/Fness, Lon^^ Nough said^^
wait for the next^^
sayo

Oh! It was a good battle!! Good job!! And what about Lon...she is the mysterious one. And you reckon you could squeze more X/F scenes in there, it is an X/F story after all! ^-^

This chapter was pretty good so, do keep up the good work!!

hehe. haha. love it. hyper right now so i propbably dont make sence. anyway...updateupdateupdateupdate!

Ehee, the young and innocent Xellia! So cute! Looks light there's gonna be a fight soon! I like the story you made with Kousa and Lon, is it just me or does Lon remind you of the Lord of Nightmares? (LoN...get it) or it might be me.

Anywho, keep it up and update soon!

Who would've thought Xellos would be a good dad? It came as a shock to me. But a good shock! You're doing well, keep it up!

Nice,smooth and it x/f fiction(-_~).Get it up!Go,go,go!Plzz...Continue!Continual!Continuous da story!!Yeeh...!

Ahh, a cliff-hanger. Great way to keep me tied to this story until the next chapter there, LOL. No, this was actually pretty good, and I am glad that you decied to flesh out both Kousa and Lon a bit in this chapter. I take it that we will learn more about the fall of Kousa later, though, yes?

Well, I hope that you are recovering nicely, and take it easy on yourself when you write your next chapter. :)

I wonder what happened between Lon and Kousa... Why is he so obsessed with her.
Now, what will the Slayers do... Let's see what happens, I'm curios. And I like the Chara of Xellia, so... innocent^^
sayo

Great chapter! Won't Kousa ever understand that Lon doesn't like him, and I gotta say, Xellia is just so cute!^-^ Plz update soon, kay. Gotta know what happens.

wow...I'm confused. Lon is an interesting girl alright...but pretty cold haerted too. Anyway update soon please