Wilwarin - now why does she remind me of Lucy Steele in Sense & Sensibility? Ahh, da evil witch!

Oh, excellent. As you can imagine, this is a chapter very close to my heart. And Lothiriel is more amiable in this than any of your Lothiriels that I've come across so far.

That, my dear, was beautifully done. What a master stroke!

“Oh, I’m not a scholar of any sort,” Lady Wilwarin laughed. “I’m afraid, I’m not clever enough, I leave that to the men."

Argh, slapworthy! well, it'll all be in vain, my lady!

I like it that you have Eomer mentioning Frodo, it lends another dimension to his character.

You know, I'm so glad I'm missing all your cliffhangers, hehehe. But just out of decency, I'll wait a couple of minutes before I move on the next chapter.

Excellent characterization, I like it very much.

And here I go again...

I like this scenario very much. I think you have captured very well the psychology of Lothiriel here, the insecurity coupled with a will for independence. Likewise the behaviours of the people around her in their various shades are very believable. Eomer is much gentler here, compared to your other stories, or maybe it is Lothiriel who brings out that side in him?

A lovely work, which you should definately be very proud of! I enjoyed this very much.

Es

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...This is incredible! It's a fantastic story! You're a brilliant writer. This was the first LOTR fic I've ever read, but now I'm afraid you've got me seriously hooked! Keep at it!

I am noticing a recurring pattern with storms! :)but that works perfectly well for me as I love them! I LOVED THIS STORY! What a brilliant idea! A blind Lothiriel is one I have not come across and I puts a nice fresh spin on things! Very complex but very well thought out!

Week off are brilliant aren't they! Don't work too hard though!

Anea

You have such a beautiful style of writing, that makes the story just flow out and with your fanfiction stories I have a rapidly growing liking for Lothíriel & Eomer as one of my favourite LOTR couples. Keep writing, you have a real talent for it.)

straight from Tolkien's mind.

i absolutely adored this!

you managed to capture the vastness of his world in this story in a way that no one ever has before.

i am in awe.

good

wonderful story! you had me perplexed the whole time :) i'm definately gonna read all your stories! you are an amazing writer and the excitement and variedness of the plot and the characters are wondeful! keep up the good work!

ok-i said i'd leave one review at the end cause i'm just after reading the entire thing. i absolutly loved this story. it had drama and romance and lots of humour too. i loved you lothiriel aswell-blind but with so much attitude-so cool. are you going to write other stories using her? that'd be really cool.

Haha... I love your quotes from The Prince.

Very clever.

Machiavelli and Mardil Voronwe.