XDXDXDXD to funny and sad too I very liked the last part "while the other contemplated the easiest way to kill a snake"

Cute story ^^

you know what? everyone has decided to not write a yaoi HiroXMomiji for thier own stupid reasons. well I for one, am FRD UP! i am going to start writing a rated M yaoi HiroXMomiji Romance RIGHT NOW!

I think this is really great!

It wasn't all that bad. The writing itself wasn't terrible; it could use a little polishing but it wasn't terrible. It seemed like it was taken right from the series though; I think a similar thing happened with Tohru and Momiji (without the whole sleeping thing)And, um the ending sorta ruined the feel of the story. But it was funny. So, um, ya. You probably know all this stuff nayway, so I should stop talking now. Bye.

that is so cute but the ending is so so wrong.

It was so sweet!! And the last part was absolutely hillarious.

Oh my gosh...that's so adorable!
MAKE MORE~!

No...NO FLAMES..yes s'mores :). This is an absolutely great job here. Two thumbs up!. Okay...shall stop that now.

But seriously, this story deserves to be continued and either way...*cough* personally I'd support a pairing here but afterall you're the writer. But good job here.