Great story, I think you should continue.

Great chapter!

YAY! I say end it here. :) It's happy, cute, and perfect. :D LOL Seriously, it's a great place to end it. And UR very welcome for catching the mistake. I love this story. LOL

AHAHA!! Mike is so evil!!

HAHA!! I really thought she was gonna stab Bobby... or at least Mike...

Hee hee, she's gonna pull her gun out and shoot him, ain't she? Wait, no, too many witnesses...

yea, maybe one more because when Bobby made the comment about breaking in a new partner...Alex said "I might have too"...so is something else up or was she planning on finaly getting Bobby and in case everyone else foundo ut?..but if that is the case why haven't the capt or whatever said anything to Mike & Carol? just wondering...thanks..good story

Glad to see an update :D Excellent work! Dont end it there :D

Great chapter, I really enjoyed it. Hope there is more to come.

Well, as you know, this was hysterical, and I couldn't stop laughing. WAY too funny. :D I can PICTURE Bobby and Mike dancing and singing, and that's just...scary. LOL I can't wait for the hotel rooms. :D

OMG Bobby can sing to me on my birthday...I loved that he got tense when Alex picked up the knife to cut the cake...he sure is a goof. I think Alex will forgive him, if he gets upstairs that is. Mike and Carolyn are going to share a cigar? and some good wine...good for them. I laughed at Carolyns line "oh, if you must".

Lol! I cant believe they did that. M Who to feel more sorry for Alex or Bobby?? LOL! Excellent Chapter!! Cant wait for the next one! :D

Good so far. I look forward to the rest.

YAY! I love Bobby and Mike's singing plans. Very funny. And I love Alex's whole rant on restaurant singing before hand. I love that the boys got rooms too. TOO funny. It's really all good, and I want the third chapter! Please!

Great start. I'm glad Bobby is getting her out of her house. She needs it. And I love that Bobby and Mike have a plan.