so im not really into the gundam thing and i hope i dont have to be to be able to read the story! but the first chapter is awesome! i can't wait to read more!

I believe its "Hikari no Tsubasa", or at least thats what they say at babelfish.
like your story.
SCC

great ctory please contunie writing it

Cool-ness! Loved it! ^_~ I think it was very in dept and creative. So update soon! Later! ^^