It must be a bit difficult writing about a pairing you don't support. I...can't say that I support the pairing either, but I find it cool that you decided to tackle a challenge.
Rather down to earth, no crazy unimaginable scene going on, so kudos for that.
As a side note, November seems to just be acting out a friendly (or just slightly more than friendly, like emotional bonding) gesture, while Red seems to be thinking of something else. I'm not sure if that was what you were going for.

For someone who doesn't support the pairing, you do a decent job. Something like this is good practice for any writer. I like that Red kissed November's hand. You didn't try something ridiculous, like having Red try to kiss November on the lips. Keep up the good work.

pretty good, i liked it. i think you have a good grasp of the characters. you do have a point about the time period and church but i still like to think the pair has a chance, however miniscule