wicked.

cool.

wicked.

Wahaha! Awesome sauce! Now! *prod* Go read mine! XD Really good though. OCness always seems a problem... but, as I've always said, seeing as they are CHARACTERS in an anime, anything that is not that anime, or manga, is out of character. Good job on it!

-Name? I have no name! I am... KITTY! Mwahaha! *runs away*

aw this was too cute >w

YAH!

I was so prepared to cry for a sad ending when I started to read this last chapter.

Great story. Loved the ending.

I almost gave little comments after each chapter, but I thought that no one needed to see my name that often.

I sat here for about 2 hours as the sun rose to read this story. It's good. It's complete, I love the fact you skipped over Sesshoumaru time carrying the child.

I do have on small puzzlement. I'm not sure where I saw this, but there was something said that made it sound like there was more than one child. I should find it if I'm going to talk about it. Clearly that isn't true, but now that he's "alive" again I have two questions. One, how long can he "live"? And two can they have any more children?

I'm in no way asking you to come back to write a new piece, I wouldn't dream of it. But I wouldn't dream of stopping you if you did.

RECAP.
Amazed when Miroku left Sesshoumaru home. How could he I thought. After the biting and flowers and such.

Didn't really expect Ihou to change like Inuyasha. For a second I did think that you were going to have Miroku introduce him as uncle after they saved them.

When they found out that he wanted to be with Sesshoumaru to have the child, the only person I wasn't really upset with for their reaction was Inuyasha. He would feel that way no mater who hooked with his brother because it was his brother. But Kagome. Slime?? She's from this day and age and from Japan where they have new-half's. She shouldn't have hurt him that much. But other than that flaw, she is one of the best versions of that girl that I have read and liked. In most stories I've read, she's not liked and even in the way. Here, she's a good person. Mostly.

Loved the bit with the hands when he was talking to Ihou. Very insightful and cute. Cute because of the kid, insightful because he shows how much he loved them.

Ok... I've rambled on enough now.

Hey, are you still writing at all? I haven't checked the date of any of your other stuff so I don't know.

oh.my.god.

That was beautiful. I cried. Not kidding.
Best.Pairing.Ever.

((I like periods btw. :3))

Yeah,I absolutely loved it.Your a great writter.

awe i loved this story. yay happy ending!!

that was a very beautiful story!
ASOTA

aw...very cute ending...
totally loved it!

wow...nice...actually...i have no problem with gays...about half my fiends are either bi or gay...it's a wonder that i stay strait through all this shit...actually...my ex-boyfriend dumped me then went with a guy...go fucking fugure...

Wow...they did get progressively out of character, but in a fairly believable way! Not bad, not many can do that and it IS hard to keep the characters in character especially when working with unlikely couples. And I am a -san not a -kun! Lol! That's a first! Not that I mind, you know, just pointing out some facts. No offense taken and no apologies necessary. I'm gonna go look at the other ficcies to see what you've written.

Yay! Sesshoumaru is strong, but at the same time he's fallible. I agree that it is a very good plot device that no one likes to use, and I'm occasionally guilty as charged. After all, working with God-like creatures is stupid and hard; look at almost any Mary-sue/Gary-stu fic for damn good examples. Overwhelming angst but at the same time I miraculously stay alive inbetween the tears and I'm to sexah to be resisted!

What I also noticed and am amused with is the fact that though Sesshoumaru has 'fallen' the little imp/toad Jaken is still standing, and Rin too. I admit to not having liked him in the beginning all that much, but he's a damn good creature who is loyal but still has enough independence to occasionally state his mind, not many good 'servants' are willing to do that directly to their master's face. I'm convinced that's why Sesshoumaru lets this sometimes useless imp/toad follow him around, because he's not wholly controllable and does not always follow.

Mwahaha, first chapter and I'm loving and believing the characters are directly from the anime/manga! Haha! No easy task, I know. Off to read the rest!

I love this story. It is too bad that it has to end. I really like the way you ended it, though I would have like to have known what happened to the others.

Can't wait for future stories.