I've read this story 4 times and I really hope that you will continue. It's very different than other fma fanfics and that is what makes it interesting. And you can't leave it here. It's a f*ing cliffhanger. You are killing me, y'know.

It's well-written but I think you should describe peoples' apperances a little more, as well as places and objects. I'm not really sure what Sylvia looks like. Darn shame!

Please keep going. I wanna know what's going to happen. Love your stories!!=)

please please please update really soon... i know you havent in a while but i really like this story... ITS SO COOL!

GHAD, I'm hoping this has a chance of it being updated. D:
It would be horrible for it to just end like this!

Wow, killing the protagonist already? I suppose with your writing, I shouldn't be surprised ;p Good chapter.

Yeah, Winry taking charge! That's certainly good to see, lol.

This was rushed in a few parts, but otherwise I liked it. There was more detail too. I can hardly wait for the plot to thicken.

Off to the next chapter!

Remembering vaguely what happens later, this opening made me smile. I mean, really, who expected a little dehydration to wind up with a search for Atlantis? Why can't something cool happen to me when I get thirsty?! D:

The writing was good too, especially considering when you wrote it. The lack of... detail, I guess, didn't do much for me, but it was good nonetheless.

Looking forward to rereading. ;) Maybe there will be an update down along the road? Huh? Pretty please? I'll give you a review if you do, hee hee.

OMG Please you have to update soon!! This is incredible and so creative! I cannot wait to see what happens next!!
I love all your stories!!

^^
-cLoud

Oh my god~
Update soon. XS
I's like to read more.

T_T
This hasn't been updated in abut a year...
WHY!
If your gonna write such an awesome and good story,
FOR GOD'S SAKE FINISH IT!
It really pisses me off when I read an awesome story and it doesn't get finished.& I'm sure it ticks others off to!
FINISH IT!
Or I will make sure you'll regret it if you didn't :)

Oh, no! I can't believe that they got caught, and by a freak-show circus no less. I really felt sorry for Ed when Al walked away and Ed couldn't follow because of his condition. The spin with the circus was fantastically made and I certainly didn't expect that coming.

I'm torn about Winry's seemingly new ability. On one hand, I thought it was bit over the top that she Too had some ability. Yet another person that got some ability that yesterday was only a myth?

On the other hand, I speculated if this was another one of Ed's new abilities. That, I think sounds more reasonable than when people with strange abilities, popping up, becoming common.

This story reminds me very strongly of those classic movies and then I don't mean only Little Mermaid (but that too). I think that it will be very interesting to see how this story will turn out.

I love this story, and yes, some people can't ignore a story with a plot like this. Me included. Ok, I give in, this is one of my fav type of stories... So you can guess what would happen if you updated... Fangirl squeak ftw!
I like how you've written this fanfic, and I'm getting really curious at what would happen next. I'm almost in love with your fanfictions.. Ok, now I'm just ranting. Summuary: Love it, and please update.

Great story so far!! I love it, can't wait for the next update! (tip: dunno about you, but my muse usually stays still while consuming good music)... XD

Hi ^^

its me Lundeyaoi33 from Deviantart..

im really touched of your story 'The Call Of Atlantis' But also i think of their usual emotions.. that they dont think of winry ONCE but she tinks of them all the time..
i guess im thinking on Al and Ed not even talking of what Winry might been doing or anything..
of course i know they need food to survive and so on
but also makeing some unknown emotions from the boys and special Ed caus i think of him like the Main main person in the fanfic.
as you know itwould be nice to see alittle pairing in thoose stories even if they might not end up with eachother i guess it would be more enjoyable to read.

i hope i didnt confuse you or irratate you with my idioticness ^^

~ Lundeyaoi33

O...M...G! This is such an amazing story! I hope to read more! Keep up the great work! PLEASE update soon! ^^

You haven't updated in a while, is it authors block, a full schedule, or just plain forgetting about this story that's causing it?
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Whatever it is, I hope it gets resolved soon.