étourdissement

That was good. Is it going to continue? Oh well i guess we will have to let the fates decide. You know this has been on of my favorite stories from the beginning, i'm glad that it continued.

"faded like an old favorite shirt that had been washed too many times" ...Best Metaphor ever. I loved this fic, one of your best. Congrats dear Sydney ^&^

Haven't seen you write in awhile. Glad yhou did. Well, it's good and deep but I think you could go farther into details and make it a bit longer. Good job babe.

HOW COULD I FORGET TO SEE THIS FIC! shame on me ...man, I'm crying this is so sad...

Great story but how did she know it was a boy?

sydney i want to cry it is so good if you don't write more chapters i will kill you. but i got to figure out what happens!

Wow, that is intense, but beautiful nonetheless. I love it.

VERY nicely done. I really like your April.
I love that song. You worked it into the fic nicely.
Congrats. Great fic

Wow. Liked. Adam! Nice name. Liked it. Whoa...like whoa.

Wow. That was shocking. A very powerful piece. *applause*