That was a very dramatic story. It was very interesting. I liked it alot.

RogueRemy123

OMG! THAT IS SO SAD! T_T BUT I LOVE IT! PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER!

- Aqua

Oh my god...how sad. Wow...I can not beleive it, the way you made this, it's so emotional. Now, me, I usually pair Quatre (GundamWing) and her together, but Kunzite is cool to! :) Wow this is such a great story, sad, but great. It's gunna be a fav, hey,make another one of these, but not the exact same story, okay? Please? Awesome story, ja ne, Neo Venus! _

Stephanie (Animechic24)

Amazing story! Are there more parts to come?

o.0 Woah. Dark and angsty,..very nice!

This was so good, I'm going to add this to my faves! I hope you'll write the other parts, too. And if you do I hope it will brMars' part first!

Phuong: Weep! Weep! Weep! This story is really good, except it's a little sad! Keep up the good work! _

Jerrica: I really like the way you write! But, it was so sad I almost cried! PLEASE write some more! _

this was good, kind of sad and deep, but i extremely enjoyed reading it.

Excellent story! Hope you write a sequel -

Great story keep writing

This is old? Man, I know finding old stuff I've written makes me want to cringe at how bad I think it is. But this is really good. Thank you for posting it for us to read. Please keep up the wicked cool work! _