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| Everme 2006-11-10 ch 1, | abuseooh, great. I'm more of a Flack/Angell person but this is cute |
| jeffandjimmieschick 2006-10-01 ch 1, | abuseOH MY GOD! AH! I LUV THIS FIC AND I'M REALLY INTO THE HAWKES/ANGELL PAIRING! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND WRITE MORE! |
| Bluenose 2006-09-29 ch 1, | abuseGood idea, good story, Iloved the description of Angell at the end, very vivid |
| danielle 2006-09-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseI liked this part 'At nine o’clock, the bar was already packed tight like a can of sardines; the dining area full of clamouring patrons, clinking glasses and bottles. The bar was in much worse condition: bodies were close as the night din continued, the overlapping voices blending together to create a melody of conversation.' Nice description! |