boycrazy30008 2007-10-21 . chapter 1both your stories were great you should have draco get the cane before the charm is taken off |
xXMIKANXx 2007-09-30 . chapter 1do draco next chapter |
The Dead Snake 2007-08-13 . chapter 1gigglesobgapeomg |
ProperT 2007-01-11 . chapter 1That was good. I loved how you made Ron, and you have to sequel it, How could Snape just let Draco go, he's his head of house for god sakes, and it even made him mad. Sequel it. And make sure Ron keeps being such a wonder to read about. |
silverbells 2006-12-16 . chapter 1Who can resist more of this sequence? I certainly would like to see Draco get his comeuppance. Good job on both this and the other. Keep up the great work. |
Padawan Jan-AQ 2006-10-19 . chapter 1Oh wow. Well that explains it. No wonder.. if Malfoy chamred it.. oh my. this was a great story but very heartwrentching too.I love Ron, for being like this. Your Snape is very inetersting and I loved the broadcasting of thoughts. I really liked how SNape was reasoning that he had to make the boys tough. I suppose that after this caning, any other canings will be nothing in comparison. I hope Malfoy gets it! He should get at least 11 slashes with that charmed cane! |
Spice of Life 2006-09-30 . chapter 1Of course we want a sequel, hehe. Excellent job, although very y'know, graph as you said! :P |
excessivelyperky 2006-09-28 . chapter 1One wonders after this how many scars from the cane Snape bears, and if James Potter ever charmed it to whip him harder.
Not that Albus would ever believe it, of course.
Excellent! |
Eranim 2006-09-28 . chapter 1I suppose I must be a terrible pervert as well, for I loved this. I think you must be the master of trio hurt/comfort...and the way you did Snape! It was fabulous. Please, please write more. |
hpaa 2006-09-28 . chapter 1Whoa.. that was brutal...
But I guess thats what makes the Harry/Ron bonding so special...
A sequal would be great,, a Harry POV would be even better...I really wonder what goes on in his head when he sees Ron going through so much for him...
Your last 2 chapters of 'Helping Hand' are one of the best thins I have EVER read...and keep going back to it when I am feeling low...its makes me feel nice and warm :)
Keep writing! |
Minathia 2006-09-28 . chapter 1draco totally needs some revenge. say - 17 lashes from the cane with his curse on it? |
Solstice Muse 2006-09-28 . chapter 1The site wouldn't let me review just now so i'm trying again.
Woo sacraficial Ron!
Also...I want Draco to bleed for that! (gr!) |
Leviathan0999 2006-09-28 . chapter 1Woah!
I find myself wondering what this world's Dumbledore is like. Surely not the twinkly old darling we know and love, if he presides over a school that allows canings as brutal as teh previous tale's much less this one!
You were certainly a lot meaner to Ron when he said that line than I was. (Although I think in truth I was far crueler to Ron before that line, if in a wholly different way. Between the two of us, we've really mangled the poor bastard haven't we?) (And that doesn't even count the times we burnth him to a crisp, or I cut him in half!)
This series of stories, twisting our familiarly benign Hogwarts into a place of cruel torture, are just incredibly compelling and disturbing.
I want to see two sequels, one a very direct one to Growing Pains, and one to this, both of which are involved with the Trio's mutual healing.
I hurt with the hurts. I need the comfort.
(Oh, in case it isn't clear, I give you full marks for this. It's a great, great story.) |