   Kara 2001-09-04 . chapter 1 I love Original Cindy. You've really captured her voice here. Very cool job. :) |
| EmpressV 2001-07-25 . chapter 1 That was so cool *sniff* *bawl* I loved OC and Max's relationship, I keep hoping they deal with how bad this has to be hurting OC |
| Artemis3 2001-07-12 . chapter 1 very well written. good characterization. |
| fyrebird 2001-06-19 . chapter 1 This is a good stream-of-consciousness piece. I've never been able to handle first-person well; you cover it excellently. Please keep writing! |
| Jane the Frog on the Wall 2001-06-19 . chapter 1 Wow. I *really* like this story. I know how hard it is to write for Original Cindy, but you've done it really well, capturing her personality and the way she speaks and thinks. The idea is nice, because most of the post-finale stories I've read have dealt with the X-5s and their reaction to her death, all that, but you managed to not only remember the Cindy, but write her really well. I liked the ending, very...poignant, almost. The symbolism of various people sitting on top of the Space Needle has been used to death, but you managed to take it and put it into a different and original perspective. I like your work, hope you keep writing. *grin* |
| Whisper*In*A*Dead*Mans*Ear 2001-06-18 . chapter 1 i luv! think u should maybe, continue with her thoughts when she gets word that shes alive or something.... |
| pari106 2001-06-16 . chapter 1 Awww...that is so sweet! And sad! You got the OC-speak just right. Great work! |
| leighleigh 2001-06-15 . chapter 1 Great! Its nice to see somethin that's not all M/L. I'm always interested in stories involving other characters interactions/povs of Max, especially Cindy since she's the only one who knew 'bout her. Great interpretations! |
 Sonar 2001-06-15 . chapter 1Do a POV of some other character about this. |
| a reader 2001-06-15 . chapter 1 That was excellent! The way you wrote Cindy... so powerful.. so accurate! Keep up the outstanding work! |
| Zanna 2001-06-15 . chapter 1 I've been waiting for someone to write a story about the aftermath of the season finale from Original Cindy's POV. Thank you! Thank you! You handled her 'flava' very well. |
 Original Max A 2001-06-15 . chapter 1I am going to cry. Too many people don't give Original her props. Thanx. |
| Ekunze 2001-06-15 . chapter 1 This was cute -- you've got OC's speech patterns down well. Keep writing!!! |
| Sandy 2001-06-15 . chapter 1 Nice reflective story. Very believable as being O.C.'s point of view. Next story try double spacing between paragraphs. Thanks |
| Miro 2001-06-15 . chapter 1 Nice. You really capture Original Cindy's voice. |
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