You can count me as a loyal fan of your Unknown relations series.
I love your newest story!

Good chapter. Thanks for writing. W.

Awesome chapter! Watching Hayden mature and change more and more is really great. I can hardly wait for some Goblet of Fire stuff from him. A lot is going to happen. It's been a big year for the two of them, and things are only going to get bigger.

Hayden is so confused, why he "feels" Orion?. When did Hayden start to put the pieces together: Orion's eyes, the "bond" between them,that Orion was adopted almost at the same time that Harry "died"...
If you don't notice, I love your stories.

I love this story so much... i mean the Unknown Relations and tis Diary. It's so brilliant! I love the way you give *voice* for every character. When you're reading the Diary it's so Hayden! And he's so different than he lookes like from Orion's point of view. A confused kid with his 12-year-old logic, thrown into the world he has next to no idea about. and i like how you pull out Ron. It's just as he should behave without Harry around. And NEville is just great. Jsut as he should with parents in his life. And i know i'm probably writing review to the wrong story of the pair, but does it really matter?

Thanks again and I'm looking forward for the update!

I'm suprised that Hayden hasn't put the pieces together yet. He knows about the twin bond and has had moments like that with orion, he's commented on Orion's eyes being like Lily's and was there when it was said by Peter hat he knew those eyes, and also he knows that Orion was adopted around the same time as Harry "died" and his parents left, only to be slightly obsessed with Sirius's son.

awh, i felt really bad for hayden when he wrote about not being special and that he doesn't think he ever will be. one of those life moments that people go through

I love it!! I can't wait to see Hayden point of view to the goblet of fire book

thank you it was a good one

I feel so bad for Hayden in the Feb 20 entry. That must have been so frightening for him.


"I think Wood was confused that anyone would consider schoolwork more important than Quidditch."

HAHAHA yes he would be


"I try so hard to do well in school and be a good Seeker but know one sees it. All they see is me being ‘the-boy-who-lived’ and think that I get treated special"

And no one deserves it :(


"It’s like Orion takes on another personality when someone’s in danger. He’s not a kid anymore. He’s a trained Auror—like his dad. He didn’t panic when Rose was taken. He thought everything out. He knew we couldn’t take Pettigrew on alone. He knew I was the weaker dueler and sent me in first so he could disarm Pettigrew. How does anyone think of this stuff in a matter of minutes?"

I really like his thoughts on Ori. When you're raised by an Auror...
It makes me feel bad for Orion though. No one should have to think that way at 13. I mean yeah it's good but I still feel bad.


Nice to see this updated! :)

I have to wonder when Hayden finally discovers the truth or at least becomes suspicious enough to confront Orion. I 'm looking forward to the next chapter. I'm guessing the times that Hayden was 'with' Orion was the Bond briefly activating?

I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.



Thank you,



Terri

Great chapter! I love it!!
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I like how you're doing this, it makes it so you get to see it from Hayden's point of view. Something most stories don't do. Keep it up

I guess that makes sense, canon Harry had a stronger will against the diary not only because of how he was raised, but because of the connection he had to Voldemort. Hayden, however, wouldn't have that, and his will would probably be weaker because of how his life has been. I'm started to get interested in how 4th year is going to go.