As good as ever, Snodin!

Love your depiction of Manjyome. You're one of the authors out there that can accurately show his tragic yet proud personality. Great work on that quarter!

The storyline itself is also progressing very nicely. Looking forward to see more of it.

I just finished reading all 10 chapters. At first sight ht first chapter it self seemed really long, but once you get to reading it its stlye keeps you going on and on. The set of was prefect and one could oly imagine this would how things would go down and such an ocasion. The Manjyome story-line is simply breath-taking. Only thing disapointing was him losing to his brother, but I understand, that it was nesesary to your story. I don't have a liking to Ryo, and this fic hasn't changed that. Although I understand his pain of being robbed from duelmonsters, torturing ones little brother is unforgivable. That reminds me: why'd you have to do to Sho the same thing the anime did? Just when he started showing some character you kicked the poor guy back to failure. Manjyome's last duel was relly horrific and dramatic. Great chapter. So all in all, aside from anime-style dueling this has proven to be a great fic so far. Sorry if the size of this review may turn out to be a problem...

You know, I'd be REALLY freaked out right now if it wasn't for the fact that I'm Hindu/Buddhist. So, I don't believe in Hell or it's ruler. ^-^

Moke moke! XD I love Motegi and his chillax nature. *yawns* Better talk fast, before I fall asleep. I just hope Jun-kun's gonna be...-yawn-...O.K...z...-is asleep-

BAD RYO!! THAT'S A BAD RYO! HOW COULD YOU DO SUCH A THING TO YOUR OWN OTOTO-CHAN?!?! -still crying-

Stupid witch! Where's a mob when you need one?! Either way, GO SHO-KUN!! Beat some sense back into your Nii-san!

God dangit. I ask you, how are people like Ryo so easily taken in by people like Monkey and that lady? If anyone ever tried to brainwash me like that, I'd just walk away. I wouldn't listen any longer than I had to, because that just gives them more time to convince you.

Yay! That's my Yugi-kun!! ^-^

Yeah! Go Jun-kun, go Jun-kun!! Punched him right in the kisser, WOOT! XD *continues reading* O.O...He...he's REALLY going to duel Yugi...wow. I'm not sure who to cheer for-oh wait, I know...GO YUGI-KUN!! ^-^

I don't care what Jun-kun's brothers think, taking away his freedom is WRONG!! Help him Judai! T^T

Wow...I'm shaking. Though, that may be from the cold, since it's winter here and we're up near Canada. ^-^() Anyway, great chapter! I like how you explain the Japanese stuff at the end, it helps if you know what the characters are actually saying! XD

wow@! this is like, AWESOME xD xD xD manjoume finally gets light and darkness dragon~! light and darkness dragon is my fav card, they never released it in english though... anywayz plz update! xD i luved it.

This story is excellent! This is what GX SHOULD have been. Character development, intruiging and interesting plotlines, and great duels.

Keep it up! This black boy is definately watching.

Later Days

NewSon

Interesting. Even now, I can't really see a clear path of where this will be headed, but it is nice to read a (well-written) Jun-centric fic for a change.

" WOW, this chapter is real nice. It was breathtaking to me really."