Another really wonderful read!

GREAT STORY! KEEP THEM COMING ALONG QUICKLY! NEED TO READ MORE!



:)

Great ending.

yay! what a very funny way to end this story! i can totally see carson under a mountain of blanets looking miserable and letting the world know it!

i liked the ending! and yes, i would love another melony story! woot!

~Shay~

Firstly, Story was great! As ALWAYS!

Secondly, I'd like to see a new story, If you can write one.

Secondly Part b) If you're writing a new story I've got an idea for you, the Ori. Or the nifty annoying Lantian Replicators in the Pegasus Galaxy.

Thirdly:... I don't have one.

Pen

it was a good way to end the story i just think that you should have had a conversation for sheppard and weir and sheppard and lorne they had alot to talk out but i enjoyed the story thanks :)

Oh the ending was adorable! Great job!

Dare I assume that the end was inspired by me, since I suggested that all of Carson's hard work should catch up to him? ;) Hehehehe!

lol what is it they say doctors make the worst patient ? hehe :)

Poor Carson, it's finally catching up to him. Post 42 soon, I want to see more!

well its about time they talked now its time for sheppard and lorne to talk huh lol :)

ha! now she has to do it! thats good, she really should go talk to weir... if weir cant trust that her people will rebound after this episode, well then she'll have no people at all...

vaccuum cleaner stuck to the side of melony's head... LOL!

~Shay~

she really should just get it out of the way it would be easier lol :)

hehe i love when melony and talon argue :)

OK, I admit: I forgot about Jinto, too. Bad reader! (See me slapping wrist with a ruler) Bad reader!

Very nice wrap-up. It looks like another chapter's coming; it's not marked as complete yet. I can't wait to see what's next!

I think Carson should get into some kind of trouble! All he's done is work work work, he needs to rest too. Give him a dizzy spell or something to show everyone that he's not invincible!