i love it make anotherone

I have to admit it was
so sweet

That Story was soo good I love it :P

Aww, that was so cute!! I love it :D

I ;love this story! Yey!

Ok, I'm new here, and I'm guessing this kinda like "Reply", so, I'll be breive:

Your story is awseome! :) I absolutely love it! It's one of my favorites, and I think I have as one of my favorites, too. You have great imagination, keep up the awesome work!! :D

This was a good story. I fell sorry for Amy. TT

Wow That was mintt you're reli good at writing :)
you should do some more sonic and amy ones :)
hope ya do anyways lol
love sonikkuxames xoxox

This is GREAT!This is one of the best sonamy stories I have read in a long time.I'm adding it to my faves!

One word. GREAT!I'll send you an invite for my Sonamy C2.Accept please cuz' you are as I said before GREAT!

Very sweet. You know, you'd think Amy would get depressed sometimes like she did here. But it never happens.

Wow. Really nice story here; I enjoyed the way Amy put things. Great story, it was really sweet! (Nods.)

I thought that this Fan Fic pretty good.

Hm...you really out to write a sequel to this...I really lie it...This is pretty darn good...I like it a lot. i'm a new author, so maybe I'l write as good as you soon...WHEN I write... won't me write until tuesday...it's so annoying! >:-( Anyhoo, greast story! ^_^ _LUV_KIKI_ ^_^

Pretty good. I agree on the need to fix the dialogue a little, removing some pointless long words and making it more in-character, especially on Sonic's side.

Also, the plot could be made a little less cliche and a little more original; the idea of Sonic forgetting a date with Amy is a little to old in my opinion. Amy getting sick was also unecessary and irrelevant to the overall purpose of this fic.

The execution of the idea is good enough however, and I have to say that you have a nice ending to your fic as well. Not perfect, but still good.

This piece is not terribly awe-inspiring, nor does it have a satisfying effect on the reader. But it's not that bad, and is actually better than many other stuff posted on this section. There's still room for improvement, though.