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| Joyful 2007-07-30 ch 1, | abuseThis had me laughing off my chair. I normally don't like things that are written in "script format," but this was brilliant. |
| Chou ni Natte 2006-10-05 ch 1, | abuseThe only thing I know about Rachel is that she tried to kill (?) Queen Frost and she's the daughter of Jean and Scott. XP I really liked this though. Rachel seems like a fun (if not slightly temperamental) character. XP I'm glad the misunderstanding was cleared up between them, and glad Rachel didn't really fry Cap's brain. XDD The only thing I could crit on is that I noticed some run-on sentences. It took a bit to get used to the way you did the speech in this, but I think I've gotten used to it. |
| drswoc 2006-09-30 ch 1, | abuseExcellent story. I love the accidentally brain frying people. |
| littleredhat 2006-09-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like it |