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Joyful
2007-07-30
ch 1,
abuseThis had me laughing off my chair. I normally don't like things that are written in "script format," but this was brilliant.
Chou ni Natte
2006-10-05
ch 1,
abuseThe only thing I know about Rachel is that she tried to kill (?) Queen Frost and she's the daughter of Jean and Scott. XP I really liked this though. Rachel seems like a fun (if not slightly temperamental) character. XP I'm glad the misunderstanding was cleared up between them, and glad Rachel didn't really fry Cap's brain. XDD

The only thing I could crit on is that I noticed some run-on sentences. It took a bit to get used to the way you did the speech in this, but I think I've gotten used to it.
drswoc
2006-09-30
ch 1,
abuseExcellent story. I love the accidentally brain frying people.
littleredhat
2006-09-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseI like it
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