This was interesting, I love fics with different perspectives on characters. Though Fleur was engaged to Bill, not Charlie, if you're following canon with that. Never mind, it was well-written and I loved that Hermione had an obsession with beauty.

that was good. will it be a one shot or will you continue?

that was good, i liked it and i hope you continue, but if you are going for the general plot, it was Bill, not Charlie. But if you want to be different, that's fine.
Plz, do write more!

very cute little fic. shame it had to end on such a sad note but i understand that it would have been far to cliche'd if they had goten together and kissed after their ordeal.
good work hope to see more from you!!

Once again, this is the Spanish section. But, hey, you've got 6 reviews (if nobody has submitted one since I started writing this, then you would have even more) and you published the fic today. I think it kind of works putting it in another language, although you didn't it on purpose. Dunno, something I just realised (it's 1 am in Spain and I got up at 7 am... no wonder why I'm saying this stupid stuff... OK, let's go with the review). Hum. I had never finished reading a yuri fic before, so I think it's weird just because of the couple itself. But I guess this is even weirder than any other I could have read. I had never thought of Hermione and Fleur in that way (or in any way, actually), and I didn't expect that final. Poor all. You're so cruel. The final sentence is very nice, though (it's still 1 am and I'm not an English-speaker and all of that, so I can't come up with a more accurate adjective), but I reckon you must stop it there. I don't know if you wanted to continue (I've noticed it hasn't got the "complete" sign), but this sort of stories are more... impacting (about ten minutes searching for the right adjective, and I'm not sure I've found it. Definitely, I should go to bed earlier) if they are one-shots. That's only my opinion, of course. To sum up, weird but... stunning. Like Fleur herself.
I'll read the rest of your stories when I can keep my eyes open enough time, I suppose. Keep writing!

Girl: This is Spanish. Don't delete the story, please. Is great, but, change the language.

Lucky.

Hey that's cool i haven't read too many yuri fics of Harry Potter, it's original but i would like to read it in the right seccion this is the spanish seccion, see ya.
Sorry for my bad english i am not very good

modify the "Language". This category is "Spanish"

Well, i'm not very good writing in English, but I'll try. The history it's good, i like it. But it's in the wrong section. A simple error, don't worry. Anyway, you must change it if you want people read it. I don't know if other people know English in the "Spanish section".

M that. I tried to make it the best as i can. See you!! I hope you understand me! =D I told you that i am not good!

its beautiful but i dont know if the storie to be continued or not