 zutarakid50 2008-02-28 . chapter 6PLEASE DON"T DELEATE THIS STORY! I think it's funny! Please leave it up! PLEASE! |
 Blind and Painted Avatards 2008-02-26 . chapter 5Aw...SO CUTE! go zutara! please keep updating... |
 Katie 2008-02-26 . chapter 2 Oh man there were a LOT of spelling mistakes. and some of the words need spaces. and this is very OOC. example of sp = sigaret is Cigaret. im really not liking this story. sorry |
 Laura 2008-02-26 . chapter 1 Hey, sorry but even though this is okay, it is full of OOC- ness. and a little bit to fast paced. but im sure it will get better :) |
 Lunaverserocks 2007-06-19 . chapter 5nice chapter...but God is capitalized... |
 Lunaverserocks 2007-06-19 . chapter 4nice and funny! |
 Lunaverserocks 2007-06-19 . chapter 3nice...funny...not AS funny as the last chapter though... |
 Lunaverserocks 2007-06-19 . chapter 2HAHAHAHA!
Funny! I like it! I really like it! |
 Lunaverserocks 2007-06-19 . chapter 1nice chapter! |
 Tinsel Tinkerbell 2007-01-24 . chapter 1Hmm...
Good beginning, though Zuko seemed a little bit ooc.
Poor Iroh, having to live with a moody teen.
‘Oh, that's perfect! You can start with that right away! ‘Cause you know, your soldiers have him…’
xD I can picture the cheesy grin on Iroh's face. |
 zutarakid50 2007-01-13 . chapter 5UpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdate SOON! I like this story alot! |
 Edward'sBringingSexyBack 2006-10-30 . chapter 5THANK YOU FOR CONTINUING THIS! I LOVE IT WHEN STORIES COME BACK FROM THE DEAD! |
 Edward'sBringingSexyBack 2006-10-29 . chapter 1I wouldn't say it was a flame exactly. People just do that alot. It bugs them. But you live in belgium ( i think i spelled it right) so forget about it. i have barely any reviews on my stories. |
 Edward'sBringingSexyBack 2006-10-28 . chapter 4so, uh, when is there going to be another chapter? Or is that the end? I LOVE IT! |
 hummingbirdfeeder 2006-10-01 . chapter 1I don't mean to be rude, but you REALLY need to use spellcheck! It will make your story a lot better. |