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Reviews for: Living for the dream
zutarakid50
2008-02-28 . chapter 6
PLEASE DON"T DELEATE THIS STORY! I think it's funny! Please leave it up! PLEASE!
Blind and Painted Avatards
2008-02-26 . chapter 5
Aw...SO CUTE! go zutara! please keep updating...
Katie
2008-02-26 . chapter 2
Oh man there were a LOT of spelling mistakes. and some of the words need spaces. and this is very OOC. example of sp = sigaret is Cigaret. im really not liking this story. sorry
Laura
2008-02-26 . chapter 1
Hey, sorry but even though this is okay, it is full of OOC- ness. and a little bit to fast paced. but im sure it will get better :)
Lunaverserocks
2007-06-19 . chapter 5
nice chapter...but God is capitalized...
Lunaverserocks
2007-06-19 . chapter 4
nice and funny!
Lunaverserocks
2007-06-19 . chapter 3
nice...funny...not AS funny as the last chapter though...
Lunaverserocks
2007-06-19 . chapter 2
HAHAHAHA!
Funny! I like it! I really like it!
Lunaverserocks
2007-06-19 . chapter 1
nice chapter!
Tinsel Tinkerbell
2007-01-24 . chapter 1
Hmm...

Good beginning, though Zuko seemed a little bit ooc.

Poor Iroh, having to live with a moody teen.

‘Oh, that's perfect! You can start with that right away! ‘Cause you know, your soldiers have him…’

xD I can picture the cheesy grin on Iroh's face.
zutarakid50
2007-01-13 . chapter 5
UpdateUpdateUpdateUpdateUpdate SOON! I like this story alot!
Edward'sBringingSexyBack
2006-10-30 . chapter 5
THANK YOU FOR CONTINUING THIS! I LOVE IT WHEN STORIES COME BACK FROM THE DEAD!
Edward'sBringingSexyBack
2006-10-29 . chapter 1
I wouldn't say it was a flame exactly. People just do that alot. It bugs them. But you live in belgium ( i think i spelled it right) so forget about it. i have barely any reviews on my stories.
Edward'sBringingSexyBack
2006-10-28 . chapter 4
so, uh, when is there going to be another chapter? Or is that the end? I LOVE IT!
hummingbirdfeeder
2006-10-01 . chapter 1
I don't mean to be rude, but you REALLY need to use spellcheck! It will make your story a lot better.
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