|Reviews for Fortune's Foe|
| Joy 10/8/06 . chapter 4
Oh, spooky story with a sweet ending. Wonderful!
| Alpha Pegasi 10/6/06 . chapter 4
Nice ending (though I could happily read chapters and chapters of Trip helping Malcolm get better!)
A very sweet proposal.
| fififolle 10/6/06 . chapter 4
'This hurts too much.' *meep* Oh, this was so amazing. I could hardly breathe. Poor Malcolm. Oh, I would really like another tiny little bit - please write an epilogue - we need to know where Trip was and how he's coping with what happened to him. I just thought it was an incredible story. Maybe Trip has to face Hoshi, too. YOu know you have to write more ;) Please *begs*.
| Hisster 10/6/06 . chapter 4
This was a wonderful, happy ending to such a tense story. Loved it. Made me smile at the end. Keep up the great work!
| spootycup 10/6/06 . chapter 4
oh you have to have one more chapter... i mean come on... i want trip hovering over mal helping him everything... this was GREAT!
| spootycup 10/5/06 . chapter 3
holy shit.. that was great... more please... are they going to be ok? will trip be trip will mal be mal will their relationship last? more!
| fififolle 10/5/06 . chapter 3
*gulp* I loved the first scene of this chapter. Pure evil Trip-being. Fab. 'What harm could there be?' *headdesk* Loved the kind of 'have to make do with six' jolly British :D M... DK in Buffy, oh yeah, nice memory. 'Only he could make this decision' - uh oh... argh! Poor Malcolm! They are in SERIOUS trouble. Help them! I love this. That's what I think of it so far ;)
| grata 10/5/06 . chapter 3
Oh mi god! You are the queen of cliffhangers, dont let us and poor Malcolm wait too long
| Hisster 10/5/06 . chapter 3
Oh wow, you can't leave us here for too long. Where's the next chapter? Can't wait, this is great!
| Alpha Pegasi 10/5/06 . chapter 3
I think I have read all of your stories over the years.
And this is the most agh ending to any chapter of yours that I have ever read.
You are getting mean to us in your old age *g*
| spootycup 10/4/06 . chapter 2
this is good... more please
| Alpha Pegasi 10/2/06 . chapter 2
Loved the bit where Malcolm could not help himself and the false Trip takes advantage. Probably not a good idea for Malcolm to pursue Trip then!
| fififolle 10/2/06 . chapter 2
Flippin' 'eck. This is fantastic. 'More or less'? What do you mean, more or less? And just how long... wow. The whole security set up, and the image of Reed at parade rest, just great. Poor Malcolm, at the captain's quarters half-dressed and feeling like a git - LOL. Loved it. This is grand, keep it up.
| Hisster 10/2/06 . chapter 2
Oh, man. This is the best. I want more, right now. LOL Great job! Keep it up!
| Sita Z 10/1/06 . chapter 1
Wow, what a first chapter. I really hope Trip's not being himself there... I can't see him doing that without some sort of exterior influence. Very well written and gripping.
Looking forward to more!