For an exercise in surrealism, I believe you passed with flying colours. Congratulations on incorporating several surrealist and even symbolism elements into the story! I will confess I had a bit of trouble following the underlying story until I got to the end, where upon I realised that the entire sequence was Jean Paul coming to terms with himself - an effect I believe you were aiming for. Well done!

Wow, this is really good. It's expertly written. And it's creative - not one's standard fare. I am hoping against all logic that there will be a happy ending.

very good.

I cried through the end. .> And i loved it!

The first time I read this story (over a year ago), it utterly destroyed me. I didn't leave any feedback, because I couldn't - I was in absolute floods of tears and wouldn't have been able to form a coherent sentence if my life depended on it.

I've come back to this story, several times, and every time I read it, my heart breaks all over again, and I have to hunt for tissues.

I'm kind of ashamed that it has taken me this long to review this story, but there are no words for how much I much I love it, how awesome it is, and you are, for writing it, and...the best that I can do is a very heartfelt, totally sincere, awed, slightly reverential 'thank you'.

THANK YOU.

(um, apologies for the totally over the top, gushing nature of this - seem to have left my inner censor somewhere)

I don't even know what to say. That was one of the most fantastic pieces I've ever read.

Take a bow; you deserve it.

gah!
gah!
just, just GAH!

i can't even begin to form the words to tell you how totally amazing this story was! and i'm kicking myself for only *just* finding it (though truth be told it's a good thing i did *after* my test today, otherwise i would have been reading instead of studying like i should have been...)

i could not stop reading! i hope you continue to write (and especially about northstar ;))

you're awesome!

Hi! Just wanted to tell you that you did a great job with the mind ** business and that I really enjoyed your warped trip through Jean-Paul's mind. I was confused at first with the reiiterations of "somewhere nice" and others that Bobby was makiing, but as the chapters progressed I slowly realized that there was something seriously wrong, so good job writing the suspense!

Also, lovely ending and I really like how it's open-ended like this so we can imagine Bobby and Jean-Paul becoming friends, because after what Northstar's been through, he definitely needs one.

Wow! Fantastic story. Thank you for sharing.

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YOU HAVE IMPRESSED US. WE ARE PLEASED. THERE MUST BE MORE. YOU WILL CONTINUE.

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I'm sorry I haven't reviewed for a while; my computer troubles are really putting me off spending much time online. I want to say I love every line of this. The hints you drop that none of its real. The revelation. The bonding of Northstar and Aurora again, so close. The events of recent issues, and the mess they make of Northstar's mind. The blankness afterwards, not even recognising Bobby (and the intructions poor sleepy Bobby gets given!), and the beginning of recovery. Still tabula rasa, in a way. Brilliant.

-dies-

I believe you have killed me. That was just so Amazing. I loved every single bit of it, and I really should've got off my ** and started to read it continually. x3

Did I mention that I loved you? x_x

Soawesome

Darrn. It is NOT a happy day when you're at school waiting to go home to a fic that you KNOW is updated, just waiting for you.

-wibbles at the cchapter-

I would've so cried if Toy Story wasn't playing in the background. -sighs at sister- And if I didn't know that Bobby was gonna be okay. I feel...

Weird. Omg. Great Chapter, though. Bobby and Drake?

Oh wow. I'm probably going to get in trouble, but dear god. I can't tear myself away from this fic even to go to the bathroom. @__x;;

-clings to it- -reads the last two chapters-

O_O;

I had hardly dared to hope.

I knew there was just SOME twist and and and... -wibble-

-speechless- -runs off to read more-