That was GREAT!

MONY! That was great. I'll check out the sequel.

I am laughing my head oof. Little harry is so sweet and that ending was brilliant I loved it :)

I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.

the begining was so sweet...BUT the ending is so funny!!
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*hysterical laughter* U-Uncle Sevvy!

Lol uncle sevvy. hahahaha

Hee hee This is the beginning of an excellent story!

Uncle Sevvy? Awesome.

oh this brightened my day you know

What a shock... *feigns shock* Sevvie is so sweet *smirk*

AW! That's so cute!

Well, obviously, Sirius screamed because Harry told him he made a picture for Snape, or "Uncle Sevvy". Stupid Moony for teaching him that! I would be mad too! (I still love Remus though!)

I am currently rolling on the floor laughing

Uncle sevvy?

Love it, thanks for annoying Sirius.

"But he could get a stick through, so he took the cup holder Daddy used when he wanted to use the fireplace to warm his water or milk and put a metal cup full of water to heat. And sat there in front of the fireplace and sometimes ran around the room while the water heated."

I don't think the second sentence is really a sentence.

"Remus took the offered thermometer and frowned; with such a fever Harry should be unconscious and convulsing not sitting innocently like he was."

should be a comma after "convulsing"

"Friday came and Sirius went to fetch Harry in his classroom. He was there drawing very concentrated."

i think there needs to be a comma after "drawing"

"In the Hall Sirius asked."

this is not a sentence...

It was okay. I think Harry's a bit too smart for a child in nursery school, but whatever. I like how you make Sirius act though ~xD