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Morgaine of the Faeries 2007-09-18 . chapter 9
This is AMAZING. I love your style.
However: the steady dose of angst has made me depressed. And:

chapter seven was creepy. I mean, totally, utterly, and completly shudder-to-get-that-feeling-out-of-your-gut Poe-brand CREEPY. I'm sorry if the creepyness is unintentional, but there is a difference between 'sexyness' (as is a term I saw someone describe the chapter with, in the reviews) and downright blatent, twisted SICKNESS. Again, I'm sorry, but the sentiments expressed (and expressed WELL, don't get me wrong) in chappie 7 were not ones spoken by healthy minds (Neji, not you.)
Rin-chii 2007-05-27 . chapter 2
i don't understand #37 - technology, The "i" word in #40, and #48
Windflight 2007-04-30 . chapter 9
I like your writing style!
Tanya Lilac 2007-01-28 . chapter 4
Wow... Tenten as a Jounin. I love the way you've portrayed her- fiery, sexy and strong. So, i wouldn't blame the client if i was Neji. Pervert.
Tanya Lilac 2007-01-28 . chapter 3
i loved your interpretation of the post Chuunin exam matches- Tenten in hospital after her battle with Temari, and Tenten's brief words of comfort after Neji has lost. As for the last... it's definitely post-battle. I like how after the losses they have experienced, they win one, together.
Tanya Lilac 2007-01-28 . chapter 2
I laughed out loud at Technology. The wickedness of it all...
Tanya Lilac 2007-01-28 . chapter 1
I love the small glimpses into their relationship that these themes provide, and they way you make each sentence relevant and true to their relationship is flawless. You did a great job with the concepts!
*Kat
dark_innocence 2006-12-24 . chapter 8
I don't know how, but your stories kind of hipnotize me.You have a writing style that I really like and enjoy.
dark_innocence 2006-12-24 . chapter 7
This are so beautiful.I love them.
Winter Thunder 2006-12-23 . chapter 2
What is a cheongsam?

These are so good! Do you think that it would be okay with you if I tried to do it with Saku/Sasu? Or no?

Email me at: please!
Riana1 2006-12-23 . chapter 7
mouth dying sexy. you write like a bird on the wing; effortlessly and grace in motion.
Akai-Chan 2006-12-06 . chapter 1
I loved the poem. =)
Matahari 2006-10-29 . chapter 6
Beautiful poem. Very nicely written.
shohei 2006-10-29 . chapter 6
A wonderful collection. I have a soft spot for these sentenced thingies, so it's never too many of them.
But even more I liked your stories. Especially number 4, one of my favourite team Gai fics so far, and number 6.. made me sniff, so beautiful. I can feel his emotions, that's what makes you more than just a writer. Thank you very much for these
Cyberwolf 2006-10-28 . chapter 6
I should look this poem up, because it rocks even harder than most of Swinburne's stuff, I think.

Also - TAKA! *squeals and is happy*
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