well that was awesome

I have to admit, I usually HATE OC stories, but I'm loving this one! Update soon.

it's definately getting better. can we get pics of the 3 arch angels ;D. anyways i got an idea though it may seem too cliche. what if the vampire clans join forces with the demons that came through the portal because the demons need an army cause the specail children army plan kinda failed. an the vampires agree because the demons promise the vamps each a state/province to rule over when evil takes over the mortal realm but the teams just plan to screw the vamps over and slaughter the vamps when the war is over. what's a good story without hints of backstabbing right?

Awesome.

DeanConniesex

You could start to have the demons attack, maybe add more action. You could probably speed up on the romance a little, just don't rush right into it. All in all it's a good story, dragging a little, but it's still great. UpDaTe SoOn!

I think you need a little more action with the demon creeps

Like you could have some hunter go out for a smoke or beer or something and get taken by a demon and they have to get her/him out of there

but anyway its your story it's just an idea

GOOD JOB! update soon please.

LOVE IT UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

keep it coming

Loved it! I love the way you're easing your way into the romance, I think I like it this way rather than rushing into it. Can't wait for more! UpDaTe SoOn, please! :3 )

Fantastic.

YAY! Loved both chapters! I actually love the way you portray Dean and I love the OC's. I can't wait for more, and I'm glad you overcame your writers block. I've had mine for like a month, and I still see no end in sight. UpDaTe SoOn!

Awesome.

i can relate there

but do it soon please

i mean...

i have waited to long for this chapter to come out

LOL