I love the introduction of this story! please write more chapters:)

Ok now that is just hateful...finis and a wink,... That is just too wrong on too many levels. I was really getting into this wanting to know where it was going to take me.
Please say this is just your sick little self taking inordinate pleasure tormenting us for only a little while. Tell me that you intend to continue!?!

Very nicely done! Thanks!

aw the sparky angst!
love it love it love it!
a perfect companion to the return.

Why is it rated M? I liked this, so very good.

glad to see your writing again. I LOVE your other stories with Sheppard and Weir. Great story. Thanks for the commercial break from reality

Thank you for this missing scene !!
It was great ;-)
Can we hope for another chapter ?

I love this! This is exactly how he should have been feeling. I read something on the gateworld forum that was talking about something like this...I don't really remember...lol but I kept thinking that this would make a great story. I'm glad you wrote this. It's cute, sweet, and it shows how much John cares about her.
-Chicky