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| CrystalDragon791 2008-06-01 ch 1, | abuseHm...interesting. I may actually like this one. You know, even though Rogue technically cheated on Bobby--but you wrote Piotr well, he's self-assured, gentlemanly, and a freakin' Adonis. Nice work! |
| LindyLewis 2006-12-02 ch 1, | abuseI love it! Written very well! Keep it up! :D |
| Angel 2006-10-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, excellent story. Good job. |
| Amokitty 2006-09-30 ch 1, | abuseYou've taken a moment in X-history that I've always disliked and turned it into a story I love. Bravo! The Rogue that you write is a beautiful mixture that combines the sensitivity of Anna Paquin's performance, with the backbone that 616 Rogue is known and loved for; giving us a better, deeper, portrayal of this character. Loved the stroll Rogue had through Peter's memories. The mentions of Mikhail and Illyana were a big bonus. I'm happy that Kitty had her part to play too, in those memories. ;) Something I appreciate is the closer look we get at what it's like to be Colossus, from an outsider's point of view. Through Rogue, we gain a little more insight into Peter's personality and life. Their kiss was handled with a subtle touch, considering how both have feelings for different people. There is a sweetness and believability to this scene that rings true. I enjoyed Rogue and Peter's conversation a LOT. Their fears are quite similar. That of never attaining a real relationship with the ones they care for. Hers, due to her powers. His, because he wants Kitty to see him as more than a stereotype - he wants her respect. It gives the drama and emotion that makes for a compelling story. A very fine piece indeed. :) |
| Gynx8 2006-09-30 ch 1, | abuseAw that was sweet... And yes, Pete and Rogue did look hot on screen... Even if it was only for 2 seconds. lol Keep up the great work. :) |
| Dark-bat 2006-09-30 ch 1, | abuseAwesome! I've been wondering when you would get another story out! hee hee. If I remember correctly... in the comics, Piotr and Rogue kiss when they're in space, right? I don't know. I like it how you kindof had Rogue steal that kiss. that was very forward of her, and I liked it. I don't like movie Rogue. Like, at all. But I still like it how you wrote her. And, you know, her taking the cure in the movie wasn't in character for comic-book Rogue, but it was definitely more in character for the more whiney, less secure movie-verse Rogue. So, I mean... at least the writers are consistant, yes? anyways, here's my round of applause! |
| arliddian 2006-09-29 ch 1, | abuseOh! I like this a lot. There are great insights into both Rogue and Piotr. Really well written. Thanks for sharing it with us! :) |