|Reviews for Till Eternity's End|
| Josher 2/23/11 . chapter 16
It's the Heartless!
| Foresthunter 1/18/11 . chapter 19
| Aljan Moonfire 12/31/10 . chapter 2
I believe that the Yondaime's name is Namikaze Minato. If you want to look up any details on his character I also believe that you can easily find them on Narutopedia.
Awesome story though, and I hope that you will be able to get back to writing it a some point or another.
| Nicholas The Punisher 12/16/10 . chapter 8
I kinda have to agree with Naruto about the menial labor Genin seem to be...
I mean seriously, Instead of making fresh Genin so damn weak then have them doing tasks that rarely do little more than increase strength by minute and worthless amounts, just so they can improve their teamwork, the academy length should be extended a couple years...
Start at 7yr old and end at 12. First 2 years are spent evaluating skills and building teams, year 3 teams are made and they begin doing D ranks on a regular basis to promote teamwork. Years 3-5 should be something like... 40% academics, 40% practical skills, and 20% teamwork exercises (AKA D ranks).
If that happened, then they could skip teamwork building exercises AND D ranks, and just start training! If the practical skills portion of the time is spent doing things like chakra control and stamina/strength buildup, then their current Chuunin minimums could turn into Genin minimums, and then the standards of shinobi would improve by fricking LEAPS AND BOUNDS.
But sadly, the civilian council is filled with shit fer brain retards who decided to pray on an old man's time of weakness and usurp his power, and thereby weaken the village and cause countless people to die.
I mean seriously, what do you think would happen if civilians decided OUR military regiments? we would probably end up having armies that (compared to current standards) are no better than a fresh recruit still going through boot camp.
I wish I could say this would NEVER happen in the world, but constant observation and study of our own species has made me VERY doubtful. If we didn't have cold people mixed with kind hearted people making the decisions... we would be royally FUCKED
| oldspiceweasel 11/6/10 . chapter 19
I'll be honest, I don't normally like god mode naruto, because most of the time you never actually see the full extent of that power, as well as the fact that most of the time, he ends up being pretty uninteresting personality-wise.
That said, you have done god mode naruto flawlessly. He's a likeable character, he's shown the full capability of his power, and he's interesting and multifaceted as well.
But...it's been three years.
If you aren't going to finish this, at least hand it off to a good author.
| shadow'sdawn 10/12/10 . chapter 19
does it count as a flame if i tell you i want more?...no?...good. WRITE MORE :P lol
| Sailor GaOn Donut 10/4/10 . chapter 19
| The Epitome of Eccentricity 9/22/10 . chapter 19
"The Silent Muse, over and out. Hopefully I can update again soon."
Soon about 3 years? x.x This story was feeaking awesome, but is it discontenued or something?
| AresLaw 7/26/10 . chapter 19
I mus very vocally protest that you havent updated this fic in 3 years.
It saddens me greatly that my greed concerningt his storys' chapters.
So please pease please update this soon so I can have my fix
| miner249er 7/23/10 . chapter 19
great! keep it up.
| omally-dood 7/21/10 . chapter 19
man this is still really good usually they tend 2 peter out half way thru and i have to come back later because i get bored but u doing a good job
| Slytherin's Pimp 7/10/10 . chapter 19
I like it! Smart, Killer Naruto with a badass reputation! Love it! Scaring ninjas, kages, and sannins! Update!
| Alonzi018 7/10/10 . chapter 2
his name is minato namikaze if you dont know by now
| Firey Son of Hades 7/8/10 . chapter 2
yo yondaimes name is minato namikaze its true i checked it cant rember where but i did
| Epicweaver 6/18/10 . chapter 19
Great read. I didn't really care for the parallel dimension plane shifting in the beginning, but otherwise I felt that your story was well thought out and developed. Your Naruto does feel a little overpowered, but I can see how staining the Naruto-verse with some FFVII would do that.
Given it's been 3ish years since an update, I'm gonna guess that this story has been abandoned/discontinued. That's too bad. But it was still good enough to merit a review.