OMG! Honestly, you have to write more, you just have to. Because I LOVE this story! I just want to know what happens next! Please!

This story is WAY underappreciated. I've been reading it over the last few days in little snatches, and it is one of the finest bits of fan fiction I've been treated to in a long while.

I wish that it were finished, of course, but I'm glad you at least made it through the "reveal" chapter. I'm going to guess you've given up on this story, but I wanted you to know that I thoroughly enjoyed it, even in its unfinished state.

I don't know if you're still writing, but I hope you are. You're too talented not to be.

Best wishes,
limona

loved this story
stupidly stayed up way to late to read it
but loved it none the less
very interesting and plot twisting
update

your story is really good, i couldn't stop reading it.
i like the concept of a dystopian harry potter world and how you fit in so many of the characters.
please don't give up on this story!

Just found your story and now see it hasn't been updated in 13 months. Does that mean it's abandoned? Was enjoying it.

I read this all in two days. It is very well done and I like it. There were some weird typos in the beginning, but that seemed to be taken care of.

I hope you haven't abandoned it. It's been nearly a year since the last update. That would be a shame as it's such a dark, but lovely story, something you don't see on this site often. Here's to hoping it will soon be continued.

I hope you are well and are going to get back to the story soon. You haven't updated this one since March 2008. If you aren't going to write anymore on this one, could you post a final chapter letting us know the plot outline and which people are in disguise and on the side of the students?

Man, this story is awesome. I'd love to read more. Hope that you get around to finishing it, eventually.

please please please write more. This story is brilliant.

No no no no no! You can't leave it there! NO! I'm loving this story...really loving it! Please pick it up again...pretty please with sugar on top...

Fiona x x x

OMG I LOVE THIS FANFIC!

I just finished re-reading the chapters that have been posted so far, and I'm still holding out hope for you to complete this story. It's really one of the most interested dystopian SS/HG I've ever read and I've read a LOT of SS/HG.

Utter perfection. From the wickedly intelligent plot, to the mythological and historical chapter titles, to the devotion to realistic characters this story is tres manifique. I must admit that I was unabashedly confused with the entire plot, but as I continued to read I understood there was a method to your madness. The only component of the plot that was apparent was that Hermione was Nocturne. Otherwise I hadn't a blessed clue. Quite an excellent read through execution to use of language. And the sex is quite good, however the details and intimacy linger with me. And Voldermort's desire to institute stability (and the muffins) and legitimacy to his reign, and the nebulous actions of the Order make for quite a stellar piece.

Please update!
Kisses
Niobe

WOW. this is an amazing story! please please please update soon!

Wow. I just discovered this story by way of a rec site and I have to say that I'm astounded. This is such a dark and unsettling idea and one that has been little explored in the fanfiction world. I love how you take some common ideas (Voldemort winning, Hermione as a prostitute, Snape as her patron, etc) and turn them into a truly unique story. This piece actually reminds me a lot of the later books in the Ender's Shadow series by Orson Scott Card (if you haven't read them, you should!) what with the many interconnected people working on many different countries and attempting to establish (or destabilize) political structures. Brilliant story so far. I'm very excited to keep reading this. =]