I really like this ongoing story, and have read all that is currently available for "Nagori, Saimon, and Senkyoku", which is an unbelievably good story. Anyway, back to my point, this side-story conflicts with the main one. In the main story, Link was said to not speak a word to Tetra the entire festival. Is this just a mistake? or did you think that this alteration made a better story? Personally, I'm hoping that it's the latter.

Actually, I kinda liked the other version of this chapter better. ^^ I like the whole story.

True, but still I liked the original just as much.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

*sighs in a hopeless romantic way* I lurv this story so much. And link and tetra are cute! I've said it before, and know that I will say it many more times, but I can not wait till the next chapter. *crawls into sleeping bag* I'll even camp out for it.

Well, glad to see that you're still alive. I can't say if this version or the first version is better since I forgot what was in the first version and I feel too lazy to read it again. Either way, I enjoyed reading this chapter.

I'm still waiting for the NS&S to be updated. Hope to see it updated soon. ^^

kya! you must write more of this! I'm desperate to find out what the end will be! >

Good stuff as usual. And by the way, I finally finished reading all of NS&S. And now that I've read both that and this, I'm quite confuddled at the moment.

So much I'll even use words like 'confuddled.'

My god, that's cute. Update soon! This is one of my favorite Link/Tetra fanfictions! X3

Excellent chapter.

I think that worked out rather well, and I am starting to understand better what is going on and why it is that the two of them were being pushed apart. Stil, I look forwards to seeing if they can be saved now, seeing as events have shifted somewhat, will it be enough to put things back on track...

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

I love these kids. I don't care how long this gets...lie, I want this to go on for around fifty chapters. Five or fifty your work is great, see ya' in the next chapter!

I was trying to figure out whether or not she was speaking in French, but, I guess I was wrong. *shrugs* Anyway, you better write another chapter because, if you don't, I'll lose my sanity of not knowing what's going to happen next. ^_~ I've actualy been meaning to read this when you first posted it up, but, I kept on forgetting. TT-TT But, I did read all four chapters today in about an hour and a half, so, it's all good. Maybe I'll read some more of your stories today, or, another time. ^_^

Just keep those thoughts rolling and that pen moving!

~linkfreak131

Interesting...but it is too late at nightish times to make real reviews. Bah.

Tetra just can't seem to help falling into these strange magical traps. When will she learn? (I want to put 'kids today!' but only being 16 it doesn't seem to work) I love all of your stuff, and I am the last person to complain that this story is getting longer. How strange would it sound, as well as stupid, to say, " Dang Achitka! She just had to make it longer!”:p

-Nny11
AKA the lazy chaptered fic writer

Excellent chapter.

Interesting development, so now the two of them have a chance at a new beginning or so it seems...I wonder if they will use this more wisely than they did the first.

Good luck & best wishes,

Hououza

Awesome chapter. ^^

Things are getting clearer. It also explains about stuff in NSS that I wasn't sure about. Good job!

Looking forward to chapter 4. Keep up the good work and stuff. :D

-PsychoT