awsome "if he had been capable of tears he would have been crying"awsome and the tough front he had for his death eater no one to offer comfort cuase he hides the pain:( granted he also caused it:)






you've been kived

wow. that was good. i hardly ever read stories of this kind but this was good. though the last sentence was litlie confusing but i get what yaoure trying to say. well done. xoxo jules

Some of the things Voldemort said sounded slightly out of character, but that could only be because we never really get to see what he's like away from Harry.

Your ending was very good, I liked that last line very much.

Wow, this was really good, but poor Bella.