 StormRaven333 2006-12-04 . chapter 13NEAH! ...*tries to wash mouth out with water* ... *can still taste the lemon* >.< *washes again*
AWESOME CHAPPIE...*bounces* PLEASE UPDATE!
~Storm |
 Raccly e.r 17 2006-11-17 . chapter 3I love yr fics! i read yr newest one a lil while ago, the gankster Cooler one? I couldn't stop laugh!
donno if it was cuz wanksters are just funny ta see or cuz it reminded me of my no long friend who was just like that and thought nothing was out of place about it. lol
but, anyways, about this story. This ones kept my atention from the momment i started reading it! but i have one question, in this fic does Vegeta exist at all? or is it just Angel that was born to be born to the king and queen?
Also, im glad i read this story cuz it inspired me to make a song fic. ^__^
lol, i know a song fic has nothing to do with this type of story, but it does if yr random, constently thinking, and listening to music when you read like me!
but yea, anyways, could you respond back to my question? not to be rude but once i've got a question in my head it doesn't exactly leave til its somehow answered. |
 Frankl's girl 2006-11-14 . chapter 12MN: *pouts* aww, noo-noo! those little guy's are just so adoreable!
Merla: *goes gaga* aw look at them! MN, I want one, they're so cute!
MN: O.o ... err... Merla?
Merla: *looks dazed* yeeah...?
MN: /dude, this is just way too freaky/ *whacks Merla upside the head* Snap out of it woman!
Merla: ouchie. *rubs head* what was that for?
MN: *gapes* have you heard yourself lately?
Merla: uh...
MN: Argh! nevermind. Angel? please, please, please, update or i'm gonna kill this daft wench. |
 aquasage 2006-11-11 . chapter 12Well yeah, she just gave birth, he would hurt her if they had sex immediately after, and if it was a lemon...plus it would add only more into the fact the he was a bas*
Cute ending, nice tie up, and the kids sound so cute. And i'm glad that in some way Cooler changed for hte better, as did the other kolds, as they aren't as evil as we all know them to be in the series...but as fanfics are, marvelous job at creating the new story and new side to the characters that wasn't seen^^! |
 Zaya Ayame 2006-11-09 . chapter 12It's ok, Angel!! I'm sorry I haven't been revoiew and rplying much. School is really getting in the way and football. I'll talk to you later and what's your messenger address? I have you on Yahoo, but It says you haven't accepted my friend request. Anywa, good luck and update soon!! ^^
-~Zaya_Ayame~- |
 StormRaven333 2006-11-09 . chapter 12YAY for coolness of chapter! Is Cooler pleased with Avalanche's name?
(Because K. Kold is so high) -curls wing over his shoulders to make him feel better-
UPDATE SOON!
~Storm |
 StormRaven333 2006-11-04 . chapter 11YAY! Glacier & Avalanche are here at last. The question is...Will Cooler last?! ...XD
UPDATE!
~Storm |
 aquasage 2006-11-03 . chapter 11I don't know, Cooler is a messed up jerk? Who knows how he'll react?! Good thing freeza is there! And first!
They sound so cute, their descriptions and all^^! |
 StormRaven333 2006-11-01 . chapter 10*bounces with glee* YAY, I'M IN YOUR FIC! *does an aerial swoop through the air*
I love that you like the name!
Glacier and Avalanche. It actually has a nice ring to it!
P-L-E-A-S-E-UPDATE AS FAST AS YOU CAN!I wanna know what happens!
GREAT CHAPPY! *torpedo spin!* ^.^
~Storm |
 Zaya Ayame 2006-10-31 . chapter 10Yay! I like the names Avalanche!! It sounds so cool!! Glacier is the name of my friend henchmen on a game I know. Still, UPDATE SOON!!
-~Zaya_Ayame~- |
 Zaya Ayame 2006-10-27 . chapter 9That was so cute! And cool! Angels gonna have a kid!! I'm sorry I didn't review earlier. My computer was being mean to me T_T. Good luck and Update soon! ^_-
-~Zaya_Ayame~- |
 aquasage 2006-10-27 . chapter 9At first, when she wet through that !pain! I thought it was the tracking device, and perhaps it picked up on Cooler's "special DNA gift" inside Angel, and then...Bam! It sent off a laser beam and was systematically incenerating every last sperm cell of Cooler's so Angel wouldn't get pregnant by the bastard!
LOL!
Anyway, your story gets so more complex in this alaberate conflicting romance of danger!
i wonder if she'll survive the childbirth, if the concept affected her so badly?! if the pain of it will kill...her?!
Freeza is in for a shock! What now, now that his brother has claimed her, and she doesn't want to leave? and is pregnant and won't be able to work for a long while, and freeza is very protective of her, but now she faces possible death?
update soon again, whenever possible, i like this stories plot, and intrigue. |
 aquasage 2006-10-27 . chapter 8zaya-chan is this?! Yea!
Wow, after that wedding I guess she'll be co-starring with Freeza for a while, hunh?!
Yu knw it took alot of effort for cooler to get her to say his name, but he could have jut asked earlier if that is all he wanted from Angel? you know, a littl bit simplier, than elaborate love tango...LOL!
on too the next chapter too review^^! |
 StormRaven333 2006-10-26 . chapter 9I GOTTA AWESOME NAME FOR A BOY!
...Avalanche.
Cool huh!
Luv the chapter! Don't kill Angel off. I think...Give it a twist and make her the only saiyan to survive such a thing!
UPDATE SOON!
~Storm |
 StormRaven333 2006-10-19 . chapter 8*blink*...wow...*blink*
Tracking devise?
...cool
and the suspence is tearing me apart now.
UPDATE SOON!
~Storm |