i realy hope you ither update soon or give the story to someone who will because its very good and i like reading it.gg

I like! I think your style of writing is brilliant-well balanced, with not too much description, action or explanation. Jelly on biscuits? That's an unusual and messy-sounding combination. I must try it!
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The sorting seems wrong, not like it was done in the book.

Interesting

update soon!

ok i only have one question
is this a rated M story or K i don’t mean to be rude because you are OBVUOLSY a very good writer and have GREAT talent but if it is a harry/ginny romance story i think you should skip the first couple years and get in to the teen ones with like one or two chapters covering what happened in between. do not take this as a flame because it SO IS NOT you r a amazing writer i just think you should kick it up a notch or change the rating ether way i will be following the story because i am HOOKED PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

Just noticed your story for the first time this morning. Pretty good so far; looks as if you've worked on the characterizations and the result shows. :-) Should be interesting to see how things progress from here.

This is a really great story but you HAVE to use more parapgraphs. Use a new paragraph for a) speech and b) description of action/person. It's really hard to follow when you've got big, chunky paragraphs. Besides that, great story, I really want to see what happens next

Nice story please keep up th every good work that you have been doing to this story.

update soon!!

Nice but you might want to have hermione and harry become study partners or something. You know a cover to keep his mother appeased.

good work, its different, want more!