 FireShifter 2008-06-20 . chapter 4Hey, remember me? :)
I realized I forgot to review Chapter 3, but apart from a crazy semester in school, I think I was a little confused by the last chapter. I guess I figured I'd wait for the next chapter so I could give you a more constructive review.
Anyway, great job! This chapter has definitely renew my interest in the story again. Please update as soon as you can. :)
Just two questions: Does Jareth have feelings for Sarah, or does he denies he has any for Sarah? And what these outsiders (?) want with Sarah specifically? |
 notwritten 2008-06-19 . chapter 4Very interesting chapter. Keep smiling. :-) Post more please. |
 Starsparkle21 2008-06-19 . chapter 4I like where this story is going... Please update soon! |
 Where nothing is as it seems 2008-06-19 . chapter 4Very creative and well written.
I love it. |
 AmericanWoman 2008-06-19 . chapter 4It sounds like you've been through hell since your last update! (I read your profile.) I hope things start going better for you.
I'm really enjoying this story. I'm curious about that myth. Is it the 'what no one knew' part of the Labyrinth book, or something else altogether? I'm also wondering what's going on with Justin. Good story. :) |
 Callylet 2008-04-15 . chapter 3Swoot~! Updateage! -does a little dance- |
 notwritten 2008-04-15 . chapter 3This is a good, and interesting chapter today. Keep smiling. :-) |
 Callylet 2008-03-07 . chapter 1*tackles* Woman you need to start writing this again. Because I enjoyed being your beta and the story kicked ** DD:
Pretty pretty please? *pouts*
~Cally |
 Nienna Telrunya 2007-02-06 . chapter 2Oh, I'm *very* interested so far and can't wait to see how this continues. |
 Lady Galriee 2006-10-28 . chapter 2Good job. I am a little confused, but I guess you will explain everything in future chapters. I can't wait til your next update. |
 TearsOnIce 2006-10-28 . chapter 2I don't pretend to understand anything of what's happening so far, but hell, it's very well written so...look forward to knowing how the story unfolds! |
 Tom Riddle's reluctant bride 2006-10-27 . chapter 2I liked that, it was quite good. update soon. |
 dit-c-gurl 2006-10-25 . chapter 2Oh thats awesum! Its great to finally hav a new storyline! Loving the different characters as well. Plz update soon! |
 notwritten 2006-10-24 . chapter 2good |
 VampireApple 2006-10-24 . chapter 2Haha! This is a great fic. I really don't understand much of what's going on, but I love it. I'll be waiting for the next chapie. |